| Reviews for Boom Boom Pow |
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Guest chapter 18 . 12/7/2015 Please add the smex scenes! |
beau-peep chapter 18 . 3/16/2013 Yes don't stop it! Means keep writing this story! |
DeidaraUlquiorra chapter 18 . 10/20/2012 MORE , I SAY ! |
animeXIII chapter 18 . 5/9/2011 Cute. And Im with the group, about time! |
InLoveWithManga chapter 18 . 1/20/2011 This story is great. |
yo wuz up chapter 18 . 1/19/2011 Awesome chapter! Luv luv luv it! :D:D:D |
ToxicVampire6606 chapter 18 . 1/11/2011 awwww! |
Savannah chapter 8 . 1/7/2011 Good evening, it's quite unusual for me but I feel the need to review your story. So far I read it till chapter 8 and that will be it. I appreciate your efforts but I have to give you one good advice: Try observing rules of grammar and spelling. One of your chapters is titled "confrintation" - that is not very professional. Furthermore, it is annoying to read "of coarse" when it is simply wrong. Maybe you intended to make a pun but it is not funny. I am not a native speaker but I guess (without taking a look at your profile) that you are American, judging by your choice of words, and give a damn about correct speach, judging by the way you write. It's the same with German people so I don't mean it as an insult or anything like that. I just think it is a really sad development. Your story loses so much quality by writing the way you would talk. The plot is rather flat and uninteresting. I know that this is my subjective opinion, but the plot is the most important thing to a story that is not supposed to be a one-shot. You have potential but I really can't bring myself to read any further. Sorry. Regards, Savannah |
Heki564 chapter 18 . 1/5/2011 I shall forever love New Years now :3 Can't wait for the date night! |
Queenoffiction chapter 18 . 1/4/2011 Oomg this was sooo awesome .. I loved both of the chapters and the details are incredible!XD Its about time alright! And soo looking forward for the date night .. This story is driving me crazy I love that the characters stay the same Gr8 job update soon:D:D:D |
yo wuz up chapter 17 . 1/4/2011 Super Cute chapter! 3 |
something40423 chapter 18 . 1/3/2011 Cutie pies~ Okay not the best way to describe them, but this is adorable! |
black rose pirate chapter 18 . 1/3/2011 _ love this story _ cant wait for more _ keep it up _ |
blindtigeress chapter 18 . 1/3/2011 Awe! So cute! But so short! I can't wait for more! DATE NIGHT! DATE NIGHT! DATE NIGHT! DATE NIGHT! DATE NIGHT! DATE NIGHT! DATE NIGHT! DATE NIGHT! DATE NIGHT! DATE NIGHT! DATE NIGHT! DATE NIGHT! YAY! |
yo wuz up chapter 16 . 1/3/2011 Happy New year! :( poor hard drive hopefully it feels better soon :) YaY awesome new chapters I shall read soon! :D |