That was a really incredible story, there was so much that I loved, it was both wonderful and terribly sad. At one point I was nearly in tears, so much emotion, and I enjoyed the rare moments of gentle humour. It was very well written too. But try as I might, I just am not keen on the end with Remus and Minerva presumably making love, but that's just personal opinion and I still think it a lovely story.

It's terribly well written . . .but the subject matters rather - er - unusual.

But still, good technique. :]