You are an amazing writer, I understand that life goes on... But I really, really hope to read more from you in the future!

Aw man this is Hysterical! I love this story so much xD It's so sexy and i was literally bawling with laughter at the 'bionic vagina' scene hahaha! Would love to read more of it 3

awesomeness! update asap!

This is sooo hilarious!

Oh, man. Just re-read this, and it was even more amazing than before. :D

Please please please update and finish this! I LOVE this story! Love the way you wright and I want more!

Please?

It's been half a year since you last updated. Too bad that you quit the Story. :( Is was a good one, and i was really eager to know how this would end. I'm a little sad though. I've had hoped you would update some time, but this was bad luck.

I give up now. Thank you for your work.

-Happy new Year to everybody-

I laughed my ass off. Sipeswipe's teasing is hilarious. Well written.

MORE PLEASE!

i would love to see the next installment!

much love,

mizu

Oh my! I missed this while I was on vacation. Yay, you did it! Another fabulous, perfectly executed chapter. Your writing never lets me down. Sideswipe is such a snarky bastard, and I love him for it. Jolt and Maggie both wanting just to disappear cracks me up.

Fabulous humor, and I really can't wait for their first post-coital interaction.

Keep it up - I'm loving this story - can't wait for the next chapter!

Holy.. that's hilarious!

I've laughed so hard i had to cry.

This is just soo great!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

This hole hanghover thing is just amazing! You did an absolut great job in the characters personality. Very creative.

Just give us more, please. *giggles*

I've got to say that the parallel's used in this story between Jolt and Maggie are perfectly mirrored and well establish the incredible dichotomy between the Human data analyst and the very alien medical specialist.

Well done, can't wait to see it completed!

*heart*

Oh God! This story is amazing! I was already a Jazz-Maggie fan, but this fic is just brilliant! You have made another Jolt-Maggie fan. -nods-

I love the way you alternate the chapters. It gives us insight to what was going on, whilst still letting us in on what really happened. -grins-

*heart*

Sideswipe you dirty pervert XD Man I want to see Jolt and Maggie get it on again without skipping! Come on Jolt you did have a sexual relationship with Maggie! But one a bit Maggie ever get pregnant? I know a Cybertronian mech and a human female can possible mate each other (With no holo).

Just wondering.