Your writing always lets me enjoy so much.

Gottdammit! Why the fuck isn't there a continuation?! I got to end all ready and anticipating what could happen next only to find that there is no second chapter. Person(gender neutral) What the flying Fuck!? Is it not possible for us to get a second chapter. If it is possible could we get once get one say 3 weeks?

:)

more..oh god more...

I loved this Jack. He is so cool and awesome. I am rather sad that there wasn't any more of it. You did a fantastic job with it though.

I love this!

FAN!

And thus, the world was practically screwed XD

Perfect(:

This has got to be the BESTEST thing I've read tonight. I am loving how you've presented Jack here. I find myself falling even more in love with business Jack. God, I apologize for writing such weird reviews. It's really late here in Japan. Your stories are just so damn fantastic, I have no control from reading your works!

Someone (WHO WILL REMIN UNNAMED) did something horibly inapproate to my leg today

I loved it, could have done with some smut, but still a very good fanfic, very well written.

This is awesome! So beautifully written, so expertly conceived, it is perfect in every way in the sense of life in the future for these characters. Impeccable vocabulary and great sentence structure, among other things, are what make this an amazing story. Keep up the great work.

I very much liked the way these two characters were portrayed. The much older Jack Spicer had an interesting personality that I (if I were Chase) would love to have devoured or played with. Loved it. Thank you for sharing.

Awesome story, though regretable a oneshot.