awwwwww, al can be so adorable and i think you captured him quite well.

i like the courtship idea and more so the fact that al cant do anythng about it. i liked al's emotions in explaining the idea of it and then:

/"I might not have much anymore," he said, coming back over to me, "but I do have this."/ awww very sweet and i liked the jewlery piece.

I don't mind one-shots and to be honest I like this fic, and I love Al and Rachel as I couple, I've said it many times in one day and it still is true :D

It was so strange reading a story, where the relationship between Al and Rache has already progressed through the first stages. I really enjoyed it :)

I especially loved the idea about demons picking mates by aura compatibility. I hope to see you write more A/R.

Great story.I can so see Al ruining her own party so he can take her to one of his own.

Loved this! It was a brilliant representation of the confusing life of the demons in the ever after and a very likely interpritation of their courtship rituals. It was a good fun Ral fic as well! Great work, it wasnt too long in my opinion either, it was just right. :) x

I LOVED it! You have to write a companion story or add more chapters. Some of my fav stories are one shots, but then I'm always sad when I get to the end and there's no more. Keep writing! P.S. Why does all the fanfics have to be Ravy? RachAl and Trench fics are WAY better.

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Hm... love it :) I like Al/Rach fics, but they're all so different from one to the other. It seems to me like there's something missing from the end of the BMS to the beginning of the story, but that would make it too long to be a nice one shot. I really like the length, and I like the way you put the whole story together. Congrats, I'll be looking for more from you.

beautifully written and awesome! I hope you write a another soon! I love the little details you added!

Ugh! There has to be more! I want more!
I love your story! I hope you will write a companion piece, where she chooses him. But still great story!

damn that was good! I was cooking something up to try for the 200th story spot myself, but seems we both missed it!
NO SUCH THING AS TOO LONG! God, when I saw how many words it was, I did a little dance.
I like the risks you took, making up details we haven't been given, creating information about demon culture and courtship rituals. It's convincing, and wonderful, and I love it all.
More please?

It was a very good one-shot and the length was nothing but a gift. Besides, if I'm going to read a one-shot, then I want the most story I can get :D

Aww.. another Rachel / Al story after all thar Ravy stuff.

I really enjoyed reading it, i think you really captured both theire characters well. : ) I hope to read more from you!

This was wonderful to read. I truly believe Rachel and Al are changing.. are changing each other. And perhaps they could find happiness with one another if they somehow met in the middle. Or perhaps that's just the way I want it to be. ;) This story was terrific. I would love to know what Al whispered in her ear as they fell off to sleep. Are you sure you can't give us another chapter? Pretty please...? Or maybe a follow-up, one-shot. I can't get enough of Ral!