Great story. It's freaky to think about what they would have done with Katniss if the Capitol one the rebellion. The last two lines capture Katniss' character perfectly. Good job :)

Wow, I never thought about what would happen if Katniss lost. It's so sad, well not sad but sorta depressing. Really wonderful insight!

I like this 'cause it it seems really realistic. "She would have run before se stayed and fought" is quite showing of her personality.

This was very simple but held a huge impact. This feels like one of those pieces that leads into something deeper. i feel like you could have developed more, but how you had their names like that, with gale first of course, but I think Prim wouldve been first actually on her caring list.
Great work though!
KATE

so sad, but also a very good idea. what happens if all fails? good job rowena (:

Oh. Nice ;)

Really, really nice idea. A lot of emotion is in here, and that despair and loss of hope is really vivid. Yes, the emotion behind the words is really raw and well-conveyed.
And the idea of the Capitol using Katniss to crush the Districts' hopes is really well done. I like it!

Just a tiny weeny mistake here: "Most whispred." Should be "whispered".

I also like how Gale's name is first on the list ;) Gale/Katniss ftw.