Hi!

And... i want to be happy, please continue soon... i like it... really much...

Greetings! n_n

*clapping* so far u have amazed me ;3 i like ur way of telling n so u have put a spell on me to read more! lol.

and those ppl that have been complaing about not understanding a few things..i cant agree with. I have been understanding perfectly up intill now. (at some parts naruto kinda remind me of mugan from samurai champloo thought..no idea why xD) And i can also see somewhat were ur heading *smirk* the story line is flowing-u cant stop reading it seriesly :D Hina-chan is so sweet n Naruto strong but cluless as ever about feeling close to begining on love (arent we all xDD) n making Hiashi old was surprising at first but u got use to it..hell i bet he puts up one hell of a fight if he has to. and adding Bee-san will be a fun event to read too. Ah i hope Hinata learns some fighting at list when she returns to konoha (its obiouse she will with Naruto n her father :])

Blah now im blabbering away here...right cant wait for the update on this amazing story!

u cant leave it here-it will be lonely n sad..have to finish, u have to *hugging ur leg*

I'm sorry, but not even Naruto is as stupid as you made him out to be. He would have enough sense to talk to Hiashi before going back to Konoha to blab that two Hyuuga are in Lightning country (and you keep misspelling "Lightning". "Lightening" means to make something lighter.)

Also, why Naruto wouldn't know of the specifics, he HAD to know what the Hyuuga clan would do if two Hyuuga were found in Lightning Country. There was no need to tell Konoha ANYTHING. All he really needed to do was to get them out of Lightning Country.

So, wait a second, this is an alternate Hinata? She's not part of the Hyuuga clan? I wish you would have put that in the summary, so I didn't waste my time. That's a pretty important detail.

Wow... Now MORE shit is gonna hit the fan!

Keep up the good work!

NOT TOO SHABBY!

There are quite a few typos, so I'd recommend either getting a beta or just giving it a couple more glances before submitting. The story itself is interesting and the beginning is more than unsettling. A proper start to setting the foundation of a story such as this. I would however, prefer if you made sure to explain things a little clearer because I got a little bit confused.

-Oombala

making you smile is a good thing... I almost think that is a cliff-hanger... lol

NOT TOO SHABBY DUDE!

update soon

awesome i love how each clone showed the parts of naruto he hides deep within

he still hasn't figured out that he is the one who should marry her? lol I love the clones :D

Wowz... Why do I get the feeling there's gonna be a jinchuuriki death match soon?

Keep up the good work!

The biggest problem with this story as to why it doesn't have more readers and reviews is what was done with the Hinata and the Hyuga's. Her not being a ninja and not part of the Leaf village just doesn't seem right to most readers. I would have hoped you would have changed this when you adopted the story, sadly you did not.

Hai, no fun at all waiting for updates...

A-ano...could you plzz update soon.

Chapters are nicely written and the plot thickens

So keep up the good work

Aki-chan

Arigato