Awwww amazing story! I loved it.

LOVE IT!

Oh wow what a chapter! So much has happened...

Awww it was going so well until she said that:(

Aww loved it. I want them to get together so bad!

loved it! I love them together.

love this so far...

Nice chap,

LOL, George is so funny!

liking it,

There is so much fantastic about this story, but I wanted to commend you on one thing in particular. Your ability to write an engaging, authentic, well written first person pov blew me away. Absolutely stunning prose. So on top of everything else like great characterization and well crafted story, I just cannot say enough about your writing abilities.

oh my god, where do I begin this comment? I don’t even know myself, because all my feelings are all over the place, I’m a mess. your character was absolutely perfect, not in the way that she had no flaws, no, it’s the opposite. she’s a human being and we could sense everything she felt, and relate to it. delvina is special to my heart, and I loved how you brought her relationship with luz slowly. you didn’t take a rush and when they finally kissed (I was more than happy, you can’t imagine), we understood it was the right moment. you built their relation and it was beautiful, and when they fought, my heart couldn’t handle it, I didn’t believe they could do such thing. anyway, enough rambling, I have to put a final point to this commentthis story was incredible, thank you so much!

I love this so fucking much bruh this really made my heart swell dude

Oh. My. Lord. This was beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. It was an absolute joy to read.

I love this story, and I love how Lucy appears in your next story. You're a great writer!