| Reviews for The Sun Set |
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   Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 4/22/2018 I enjoyed this a lot- it was fun to read a story with America being manipulative, I don't run into these types of stories often... |
| Goog.lystrip chapter 1 . 1/9/2017 WHAT THE HELL ARTHUR. Wonderful fic, loved it. As an American I like my country to be totally bad ass, and I like how you wrote it here even though I still love my adorable alfie. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2014 OMG I am so glad I read this! I love manipulative America too so this was such a pleasant surprise thanks! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2014 Omg, I loved this so much more than I should have, that last bit gave me chills! Holy cow, that was so awesome! |
| Atheleia chapter 1 . 5/27/2014 Whoa I...did not expect this when I started reading this fic. But wow. It turned out amazingly. |
| Nendo Tenshi chapter 1 . 7/30/2013 ...WHY DO I LOVE THIS SO MUCH?! Seriously, manipulative America is something I never even CONSIDERED...and now you have me obsessed with the idea. Awesome. XP |
| JigglyJelloWithCoconut chapter 1 . 1/17/2013 Give me the lovable-idiotic-but-secretly-smart-underneath Alfred anyday! Manipulative!America scares the flippers out of me! Seriously great story though. :D And the nation that England was talking about, the one who Alfred could show his true self, was it the U.S.S.R? |
| DragoncatKHfan chapter 1 . 3/10/2012 Ever think about continuing this fic. I think it has much potential. |
| Wassermagierin chapter 1 . 11/18/2011 Manipulative America is scary. I'm not quite sure whether that makes me want to see more of him, or less... "That's because you scare me Arthur thought, struggling against Alfred I know you too well. I was once where you are now…and only know too well the kind of atrocities one can commit with so much power…" "Get out. Please, get out. I can't stand you. I can't stand being used anymore, being controlled…stop it. That's all Europe is to you, isn't it? A toy. Something to play with, something amusing…but once it's broken, you throw it out, don't you?" These passages sent shivers down my spine. To realize how much power America really has, and to consider what could be done with it... I really liked this, great job! |
| Renuki chapter 1 . 10/21/2011 Oooh, that was awesome. *grins at the end* (and hai, manipulative!America. :D) |
| Whitefleur chapter 1 . 6/12/2011 Holy hell, I love your story. And I simply adore a manipulative America. Because, c'mon, he's AMERICA! His idiocy, complete facade! oh well. I hope you can write more "dark" America. Haha :)) Keep up the good work! |
| Jeanne'sWhiteRose chapter 1 . 12/10/2010 this was awesome xD although fogive me i've read waaaay too many yaoi fan fics of these two, i seriously thought arthur was gonna kiss al! XDDDD |
| IvoryRoses chapter 1 . 11/19/2010 I think I'm a little afraid of my own country now. Wow, you can really write! Great story, very deep. Keep it up! |
| blacksugarbomb chapter 1 . 10/11/2010 Wow. o_o You have just made me realize how a manipulative America can be so much more 'endearing' than a normal America. And we all know that something lurks beneath that grin of his... :p Good job on writing this! :D |
| Marina Hawk chapter 1 . 9/20/2010 At first this was all serious, and Iggy seemed really furious with Alfred and so on and so on. Then, the way you ended it just made me crack up. I thought it was so hilarious. XD |
