Reviews for Harry Potter and the XGene: The Awakening
millerr123 chapter 15 . 1/9
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update this story because it is such a brilliant story and I couldn't stop reading it.
BarefootWarrior chapter 1 . 10/11/2019
I know you wrote this along time ago but if you ever come back to it or do a rewrite. The biggest problem is pacing. I know slowing things down can make it seem like you’ll never get to the point but the first chapters move way to fast. It feels like you just setting up lazy background instead writing a story. You probably didn’t mean to do that but it happened. I like you writing and you grammar (for a dullerd like me) is fine/great. I think it all interesting, it’s just the pacing. Lots of love from this internet hobo. Hope you are doing great if you ever see this.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/26/2019
where is harry's stuff eg: trunk and broom
ej-83 chapter 15 . 11/9/2018
Well.. Both harry and ron have super speed.. So they should be able to get most of them team out easily.. Keep up the gold work.. Update soon
yaoishipsforlife chapter 12 . 5/25/2018
well i personally would've preferred if harry ended up with kitty as no other arrows pointed to his love for ginny in this story
dragonfighter11 chapter 12 . 5/17/2018
Ugg Harry/Ginny really?
Bronze chapter 9 . 1/15/2018
I wonder if Mr. Sinister were to be burned to ash if he'd survive it? He's always popping up to cause trouble for everyone and anyone he can.
Bronze chapter 8 . 1/13/2018
Yeah, Harry really did need to overcome the fear of that night in the graveyard. Now you've told some about Harry mutant training. We just need a bit more of his magical training to balance it out. I had thought between Dumbledore and Snape that they'd realize that those children who manifested needed to get the hell out of that school! Umbitch and her physco's at the school as well as at the ministry would kill them at best at worst torture them for as long as possible. It's really obvious that those in the ministry along with the purebloods have forgotten their history, if they ever learned any that is. Were not the magical peoples attacked by those without magic in times long past? And with more and more mutants being born every year, they're soon gonna find themselves on the loosing end of a war of extinction. But then the magical world of Britain never learned anything the easy way.
Bronze chapter 7 . 1/12/2018
Wow, in just three months Harry's gone from some kind of oddity to just another mutant in a mutant school. Exactly what he always wanted. Now on top of that he can play guitar and sing with a band in front of a live crowd. He's made remarkable progress outside the ancient magical world of England. But I'm beginning to wonder how long before the other mutants at Hogwarts have to leave to be safe. Either that or they absolutely must get rid of the ministry.
Bronze chapter 6 . 1/12/2018
Of course it had to be Malformed! Just how the hell he wound up in the house of the cunning is beyond me! As for ambition, his greatest is to follow in his father's footsteps and kiss the hem of a half blood's robs. Now I don't know about his mother but his father should've been given the Dementor's Kiss right after the first war. Along with all his fellow Death Eaters. Long before he could've bred! It'd be hilarious for him to manifest only to realize the ministry wants him and those like him dead.
Bronze chapter 5 . 1/12/2018
Empathic Mimicry. Yeah, there was someone with that power in the X-Men comics at one time. Unfortunately, he died. If I'm remember correctly he died alone when his ability got out of control. He was picking up on the Hulk if I remember right. Of course the difference here is that he could mimic all the X-Men at the same time. Not that I have a problem with the way you've set this up. Your story, your way! Though I am enjoying reading it. It's a whole hell of a lot different then I was expecting it to be. In a very good way!
Bronze chapter 4 . 1/12/2018
I'm voting for Harry and Kitty. Now from what I know of the Danger Room, A, it lives up to it's name and not even Logan has just walked out without having to fight his way out. Unfortunately, it doesn't EVER just throw your sorry ass out the door. You have to work for it! So Harry's first time should be quite the experience for him.
Bronze chapter 3 . 1/12/2018
I'm totally blown away! I never expected the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder to allow Harry to stay! That just so OC! Usually he's all about controlling everything and anything Harry Potter. I've only read a few were he actually helps Harry improve. So I wasn't expecting him to do anything like this. Now I know you can't answer me this but are the X-Mem going to find Harry a tutor for his magic as well? Harry really needs to train both sides of his abilities.
Bronze chapter 2 . 1/12/2018
The ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder isn't gonna be happy with Harry actually A, being happy and B, getting the training he needs. In every ff I've ever read the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder had tracking spells and charms on not only Harry personally but everything he own as well. Thus he will find Harry and demand he return to Hogshites were he will never be safe. Nor be allowed the training he needs for both sets of powers he has.
Bronze chapter 1 . 1/12/2018
How very interesting. The X-Men rescue Harry from the abuse planned for him by the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder. The old fraud really has no idea except what's best for himself. It really makes one wonder what his plan was if Harry died before he even got to Hogwash. Or if he died but didn't weaken Riddle before he did. So Harry being taken in by the X-Men will throw a major spanner in the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder's plans for both the coming war and the lead up to it.
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