This was amazing! Was this the last chapter or is there more?

o my gosh i loved it moor moor moor! haha

aww thatz sooo great! keep up the great work! :)

xoxox 133tgangster

this was sweet

oh my gosh this is great! I love jesse's pov & ur idea that winnie is different-

u have a beta?

Great story! But, here's a little bit of CC:

When a person is talking, it's like this:

"That's a lie...we both knew," -Correct.

"that's a lie...we bothe knew" -incorrect

Also, the chapters could be longer. A couple of spelling mistakes here and there...Please continue, though!

-MythScavenger

I like this story. It's cute. Not that many people read Tuck Everlasting fics, but I like them! Great job on the story! I'd love to read more!

This is a good story so far! I just finsihed reading Tuck Everlasting and I was sad with the way it ended. I didn't want her to die and not be with Jesse. But, you know, I thought it was nice that she wasn't stuck forever and to never age. Anyway, before I blab too much, I just want to say keep up the good work! _

tuck everlasting is one of my favorite books write on!