I LOVED IT!

Its favorited.
On my mobile app.

So anyways, loved. :)

hyaaa...why tragedy''

I love it... I love it... I love it... FAVORITE!

Anyway, the only error I found was in your punctuation. You're doing this:

"Hi" She said.

But it should actually be like this:

"Hi," she said.

Okay. That's all.

So good!
Great one-shot!
Aww...poor Ryoma, didn't realize his faults until after his senpai-tachi told him. lol

So nice though they didn't end up. In a way, it's contenting:))

I was happy that in your story, Ryoma learned the hard way of

regarding people around him (especially the ones he loved) with importance and care.

Write more stories, kay ?

Aw..

Even though they didn't stay at the end, it was still cute!

Keep it up!

-Chiyoh-san-