Anthony is a very cool character and I love his interactions with Alan. I feel Alan actually likes the old guy but absolutely will not show it for fear of what his brother might think. Edgar's detention for arguing with his literature teacher over Dracula is beyond hilarious and it fits his character perfectly. I added this to my favorites. There may not be vampires but this is so fresh and original. :)

Alan is trying out the book! I can't tell you how much I enjoyed his experimentation with Sam by his side. It's nice to see their friendship sketched out when it's not pertaining to immanent danger. Sophie trying to flirt with Alan and his oblivion toward it was chuckle worthy. How many girls have had that happen to them? :)

I'm loving this! Anthony is a really cool original character and you've done a great job in creating him so that he fits right in town. Sophie made me chuckle with her take on Edgar, that was funny! Alan reluctantly agreeing with Edgar was something he would do no doubt.

This is a lovely, refreshing start! The idea of a magic store that has to do with actual magic and not the visual takes is brilliant. I can't imagine that Edgar and Alan would be pleased to see this place start up. My favorite line was Sam calling Edgar Captain paranoia. :)

I finished this story a couple of days ago and it took me a while to actually sit down and write a review. Anyway,this story was beautifully written and kept me on the edge of my seat with each chapter. The plot had several twists which made me always second guess where you were gonna take the story. The characterization was amazing, and I loved your OCs. They weren't overbearing and were a main part of the story without overshadowing Edgar, Alan, and Sam. It was amazing, and I do hope you write a sequel for this story. It would be absolutely amazing :)

P.S. I love reading your other Lost Boys one shots. They are just as awesome!

Yes, please do a sequel to this! The ending practically begs for one. This is the second time I've read this story, and it was a pleasant read. I love the Frog Brothers, and there aren't as many stories on them as I would like. I hope you make more!

Is anyone up for a sequel..?

I am! Oh,oh. Pick me! I'm totally up for a sequel! Please right one! You can't just end it! There of all places! You still haven't written one. Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr...

Until then, patience was required. To take Alan's power now was so tempting, but holding out until the brother's was accessible too would twice as rewarding. Until then, Alan needed to be alive.

it's funny how Edgar seems to always be right about these things.

Alan, you should tell him that lovely little part about the fact that he has talent too. I wanna see his reaction.

If Edgar finds you, rest in peace.

Ugh! I hate Sophie! I loved the story though.

''Oh wait, sometimes I forget I'm hanging out with Captain Paranoia''

.Ever xD

frog legS?omg lol

ur mom! i didnt do tR

Uh, yeah, you better write a sequel after that ending! I will start some sort of a protest if you don’t!

I love the scene where Edgar goes back and asks Anthony about his parents. And of course the one with Edgar and Alan! It was cute, but not over done. Your ability to write them so in character still amazes me! I thought everything was going to be all happy and back to normal, but no. You had to add the vampire thing! And not only did you have to add it, you left it there, giving me so many more questions!

So yeah, you should most deff write a sequel to this!

Such a fabulous story! This is a smallish fandom and I haven't explored much of it, but this story really stands out above all the others. Even without vampires. ;)

Your characterizations of Alan, Edgar and Sam are the best I've read. Really, really amazing. On top of that, the writing is so well done and you paint such a nice picture of both the inner and outer worlds.

I'm a fan. I would love a sequel. You've kind of set yourself up for a potential one there at the end, and this time with vampires. :)

Thanks for much for writing and sharing! Loved it!