love this

This was really funny! I loved it! I really liked the shivering sofa part too.

Hahahaha! I laughed pretty hard. Great work!

That was hilarious! I was laughing throughout the story! Great job!

Uh...what? Falcon and...Jiggly...? Well, it's warped and unusual, to say the least. The story was pretty lighthearted, despite the fact that it started with a PUNCH!

Falcon's too dumb to be affected by Jigglypuff's song and Bowser's too dumb to realize he's wearing a sofa as a coat. It all seems to make sense in a twisted way.

The typing was pretty good, especially for a last-minute entry. Only a few days left. I can't wait!

So much to love. The grownups playing hide-and-seek while the children want a quiet breakfast, the three protagonists of Nintendo's “big three” (Mario, Zelda, Metroid) crowding behind the TV together, Bowser hiding underneath a sofa (I first questioned whether he could be in such position without the sofa wiggling in top of his shell, or being stuck on the spikes. I even thought, “would he notice if it was stuck?” And then you included all of it! No wonder I love your stories), Falcon talking as if he is a lost relative of Franziska von Karma (only a foolish fool foolish enough to foolishly born into this foolishly foolish world would be a fool enough not to draw that parallel. Or has never played Phoenix Wright).

I found this to be surprisingly charming. Falcon and Jigglypuff simply found each other (emotionally). Even during such hilarious circumstances, it was adorable imagining Jigglypuff hogging his leg, and later curtsying after her performance.

Falcon, I am thankful that although I respect him and consider him a great character, I do not mind the somewhat dense and enthusiastic interpretation of him. In cases like this one, I have even less of a problem with it, as it is all done in a heartfelt manner. I find Falcon to be appealing (then again, I seem to have a fetish for dramatic characters who overreact). A Falcon hug sound so nice! (Runs after Falcon with arms open wide and Bowser dragged behind on leash). I want one!

This seemed more inclined to humor than romance. That is the only problem that comes to mind (well, not really a problem, but regarding the circumstances...). I hope you do well in the contest.