This is such a wonderful portrayal of Jesse/Rachel's relationship. Thank you.

This was beautifully written. Very, very good work.

Wow, this was beautifully written. Jesse is an ass in the show (especially right before and during the season finale) and that makes me not want to pair them in the show, but you totally won me over with this fic (so I guess I do support them in the fanfic universe, haha). The way you wrote their relationship in this fic was subtle and natural and realistic and I loved it. Amazing work :))

You write the best St. Berry Fics. This and Et Cetera are amazing. Jesse and Rachel are very in character and that kiss scene at the end should happen on the show. its so perfect

Okay, so, for some reason, I really, really love this! I mean, I can't explain what's so good about it. The present tense is wonderful and very consistant, and I love that, but also... I don't know. It's wonderful! I love it!
Would you mind if I posted this on my 'Story of the Month' section on my profile?
Write more! Yay!
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Absolutely amazing I loved it! Hope you write more St. Berry!

This is fantastic! Def going under my favs :)

Amazing. I loved it.

You had me giggling like a madwoman all the way through. I adored this fic. Their silent conversation was fabulous and the backhanded compliments and their audition were perfect. And them playing scrabble settles somewhere between adorable and hilarious. And god knows, we all love a happy ending. Especially this one which made me melt a little.

Thank you!

Very cute :)

*sigh* Jesse has definitely woo-ed me in the show, even if he's SUPPOSED to be a jerk

That was wonderful. And so believable. :D

Loved it! Personally, I'd love a sequel too ;)

Loved It!

absolutely loved it

splendid :)