| Reviews for Battared and bruised, I still love you |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2019 This is so cute! |
 Auddity chapter 1 . 5/15/2019 "Merlin winced" "'Apparently you have enemies,' Merlin winced." I suggest changing the latter into "Merlin looked at Arthur sheepishly." You're also very repetitive with the word "stiffen" when it came to the talk between friends about Merlin's magic. Plus, I suggest not using too many pronouns. It makes things very confusing on who is thinking/saying/doing what. But otherwise, I liked your story! You have an imaginative mind, try not to lose it. ;-) |
| IcyMoonOnStage chapter 1 . 7/19/2018 This was adorable! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2018 That's kinda gay |
| gaylelbf chapter 1 . 5/7/2018 Lovely! |
| STEVE chapter 1 . 1/1/2017 EXCELLENT APPROACH DIFFERENT STORY LINE, WELL WRITTEN, AND A VERY ENJOYABLE READ |
| Freckles chapter 1 . 12/1/2016 I love your Fanfiction Please write more Maybe a second chapter :3 |
| Alex chapter 1 . 4/5/2015 Beautiful |
| godess bubbles chapter 1 . 8/28/2014 Love it! Does Morgana have her magic in this one? |
| Slime chapter 1 . 8/21/2014 Beautifully written, I appreciate the fic |
| Satan chapter 1 . 5/18/2014 This was lovely! And i like potatoes! Just thought u ought to know that last bit. :) |
| Emma chapter 1 . 3/12/2014 *screaming out loud* |
| Samie TW-1D-Merlin-RotG chapter 1 . 12/6/2013 You are literally killing me with all this Merthur love! |
| Loulou2a chapter 1 . 9/23/2013 Arthur can't stay a long time without his Merlin. |
| IGottaFindYou chapter 1 . 3/19/2013 LOVE IT! And I love how you wrote it in stanzas, very cool!:) |
