i love it! with anst and everything i love it!

Woah...Looks like they're going to fight...

Uwah, poor Vanitas! I always find it so sad that Vanitas and Aqua can't have a happy ending within the game (you'd have to make it AU). He most definitely liked Aqua and I can't imagine how he felt when she attacked him. He was only trying to make her understand.

I wonder what would happen if he DID get her to see things his way. That would be very interesting, hmm? No, I am not trying to plant blot bunnies in your mind. Or am I?

Fantastic story. I loved it.

I love I love 3

Dude this cant be it! Please tell me theres at least one more chapter on the way! Please?

Oh, I love this one, seeing as it's one of the few good Vanitas/Aqua fics I've found. They're actually IC, yay, leastaways I think so, and the writing is good. Nice twist at the end.

This story is like no other. I was truly captivated and strung in by your words and just wow! Love this to death

This was insanely amazing. There is nothing - nothing at all - in this story that I found dislike-able. In fact, this story pulled me in so completely, I lost touch with reality for a moment. Hahaha!

Your characterization is impeccable, your descriptions are absolutely divine, every line and every aspect of this story is just... This is the most amazing piece of fanficion I have ever read. And I doubt I will ever read anything better.

Every single word of praise I have ever heard about you (and I have heard quite a lot), you absolutely deserve. Tenfold, even. Thousandfold. I am sure that you must have heard this countless times, but you are amazing.

And (just for this one unbelievably epic work of art) I believe I have just found a Favorite Author.

Thank you.

~Alacquiene~

Wow. I'm not usually a fan of Aqua x Vanitas (usually I think it's creapy), but this one was surprisingly good, mostly because Vanitas wasn't painted as a complete jerk. He was actually a little relatable.

Two thumbs up.

I’ve noticed you listen to OSTs. Have you heard the Kingdom Hearts Piano Collections: Field and Battle version of Xion’s theme yet? It’s devastatingly beautiful. Try the link below.

www . youtube watch ? v Qvd9RtRXSdk

Just remove the spaces. If for some reason it doesn’t work, look up “Musique pour la tristesse de Xion.”

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Back to the review:

Asdasdfjkl;g hiweo; waeo;I;

omg. I am officially speechless. You just made me love this pairing like a 1000x more. I am also firmly convinced that you can write any pairing under the sun and it would sell (e.g. VanitasxNaminé or VanitasxXion). Wow.

(You can see a pattern in the fics that I’m reviewing, can’t you? Yeah, I really like Vanitas. He’s such a fascinating character~)

Anyway, this fic was ridiculously engaging. By the time I got to the second chapter, there was no looking back. XD Also, I’m so, so glad you waited until later to put in that kissing scene, which brings me to remark on your pacing. You take your time to properly develop a romantic relationship instead of rushing blindly to the climax, and it pays off. I salute you.

- Harumaki

I love it when the question of good and evil is brought up. You have real jem here. I hope you continue it!

D:...i think i love you ;w; i love this pairing so much...good fic 3

This is really good. The first chapter, though well written and enjoyable, had me worried that this would make Vanitas out to be some kind of misunderstood Woobie. The second chapter removed that worry.

I enjoyed the fic a lot - great job!

I think you managed to single-handedly convert me to this pairing, which I pretty much now rank among my favorites. So...I heart you for that. You write the most amazingly in-character Vanitas that I know, and incidentally that translates to the best Vanitas/Aqua writer that I know. And I really, really, really, really wish you would write more of them, as, in my opinion, there are not enough, but I don't really know anyone besides you who can write them this good. So hope to see you around (nudge nudge), and I'll be following your other story, the 'love rectangle' one.

This is so awesome!

You did a great job writing Vanitas's character. You kept him in character while adding a new dimension to him and that is tricky to do. :)