I love this. That's all I can say.

Yeah,nine years late, I know xD but I have just discovered few months ago this jewell called Good Omens and I only wanted to say that this is one of the best A/C fics I have ever read. As other have said, I would love to read another fic from Aziraphales POV but I supose this arrives a bit late. Anyway, ¡congratulations!

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Wow. That was incredibly good, and so amazingly powerful and depressing...

I loved this! I like the bit about Crowley's nature having changed because of Aziraphale's disappointment when he does something bad. I love the way you described his emotions so perfectly, the denial, the lust, the confusion, the final understanding...

"Lust is something I can deal with, something I know. Something easily cured. And I could cure it, certainly. I could take you, willing or not, and make you mine and mark every inch of your skin with my fingerprints and make you cry and beg and scream...

I could make you scream. Pleasure and pain are indiscriminate things, really.

And it's in my nature to cause pain. Should be in my nature, was in my nature. My nature has changed. I don't want to hurt you, couldn't hurt you, I just want to hold you and kiss you and mark every inch of your skin with my fingerprints.

I still want to possess you. Some things don't change.

I just want you to possess me as well."

This bit is good, it shows clearly the difference between lust and love, and how Crowley cannot hurt Aziraphale, despite being a demon. It captures the whole concept of them being in love perfectly.

That undertainty flashing in Aziraphale's eyes - I really hope it's because he's realised that he's feeling something for Crowley. I wonder how long it'll tale him to finally figure it out - lucky for them they're immortal! Yes, as Crowley said, he can wait, because he's got all the time in the world. And when Aziraphale does realise it the two of them will still have all the time in the world.

Wonderful job!

ooh. Very nice. i like stream-of-consciousness fics quite a bit. This was no exception. I'm grinning like a maniac currently.

Great, great story. I loved the trail of thougth, it was baffling to read it because I think I've written a text beginning with almost the same words and this fic really made me remember how I felt then (wich is maybe not such a good thing since I was unhappy as heck). I like the short simple sentences, it gives a kind powerful impression, it really felt like blow to the stomach,only in a good way. I wish i could write like this.

*jaw is somewhere on the floor* I wish i could write like that... and i can think o nothing to be improved. please wriet more (unless you already have, and even then write even more would'cha?) Best written piece i've read in a while...i'm in love with it...love it darlt. GOOD JOB. (can't stress that point enought)

Very nice, I liked it lots.

I love it when they're vague. That was well written and, for some strange reason, cute, in some strange way. One of the best CxA slash fics I've read. Coz it's all descriptive and stuff. Yeah. Everything fits together really well, too; for example, Crowley contradicts himself and changes his mind, which is really how people think. I'm not sure about angels or demons, but human minds lie to themselves then change it later on. Anyway, very pretty, very cool, very much liked. Improvements? I don't know, I think a misplaced comma somewhere, check it over once more for little things...but the story itself is lovely. I've been using that word too much, lately...

-Ette

*stares*
*stares a bit more*
*keeps staring*
*drools while staring*
I... *nope...can't speak yet* Er... *gawd, why won't my vocal cords work?*
*begins sobbing* There we go! Needed that, I did! So...so...so very beautiful and wonderous! I love Crowley so much...It's in my nature. Was in my nature...nope...my nature hasn't changed, still love him dearly.
Anyway! Wonderous, wonderful, glorious..er...gloriful fic! I love it! And I completely think you should continue it! Crowley has captured him...what or what is the dear demon going to do with his new found power? *cackle* I can think of a few things... _
~Lizney~

This was beautiful! Really beautiful. I'd stay and praise you more but I have to go to class now.
Adios!

And this one was good, too! In fact, I almost like it more because it focused so much on Crowley's maddened thoughts, which I can relate to. _;; (makes a modest shrine for you out of paper lanters and shoeboxes)

I liked that. A lot. It was different, but it was good. Keep up the good work.

PS: That has to be the lamest review I have ever written. I'm sorry. It's late and I need to go to sleep. Thanks for the story!

Er... beautiful and perfect personality-wise, right? I mean, he's kind of chubby... and from what I understand doesn't really bathe or do his nails much as Crowley does...

I'd really like to see what Aziraphale's p.o.v. is.