This was an interesting story, but I highly dislike all the references to sex, especially between Aang and Katara. They're still children, after all.

"Well, Zuko was crowned fire lord."

"Huh, good for him"

Those lines right there had me laughing for the longest time...I love it! Glad you didn't focus too much on the finding space sword and boomerang part of the story. I have my own theory and might have skipped this good story (a grave mistake) had it made that a focal point.

The storyline and characters are interesting but It feels rushed and the relationship is kinda... forced. I am not realy feeling a true relationsihp between the characters. Its like they are going through the motions. Good writing still.

good story nice back story for June and who doesn't love quotes from left 4 dead 2 about crayfish i just hope that there is more

really enjoyed your story thank you for taking time to write this

I liked it a lot, I've got to continue reading it!

enjoying the story so far.

Awesome job! This has definitely given me high expectations. This chapter is just as good as the first 2. I hope after it's added to my community, you'll get more reviews.
Oh yeah, congratulations, this has been added to my community! Keep writing!

~Summer

Wow, just awesome job. I have no CC for you today.

I'd only encourage you to update! One more chapter, my friend. One more chapter with the same quality and I'll add it to my community.

Keep writing and have a nice day!

~Summer

I really love your note in the beginning. It's very creative and sets the scene for your story. It's awesome, keep it up.

You have awesome spelling/grammar, and this is really well-written. Sokka and Suki are both very much IC. I'm impressed. I hope you continue this. Who knows, maybe I'll add it to my community. My only suggestion would to make it a little longer. Not much, it's a nice length right now, but I'd encourage you to expand a little more :)

It's spotless though, keep it up.

Keep writing and have a nice day.

~Summer