Beautifully written! I hope you'd keep on writing these. You really know your stuff.

Brilliant. Keep writing

OMG I LOVED THIS!

I loved this. You did a great job showing the connection between Voldie and Bellatrix. I felt like I was there, watching the scene take place. I like your interpretation of how she was feeling during the Battle.

-Morghen

This was quite interesting to read, I've never read a fic that looked at Bellatrix from that angle so empty and straight foreward to understand. This was very enjoyable, great job!

~wolfie marauder

Beautiful portrayal of Bellatrix in her final moments. I've never read anything like this, but you capture her obsession with power, her arrogance, her insanity, very well. I really like the way you write her. Very dark and intense, lovely!

Very, very powerful! I got so caught up in the words, it was SO well written. Seemed /very/ Bellatrix! The last paragraph in particular blew me away! Great work :)

I did love the wa you represented how Bellatrix thought that Voldemort relied on her which he probably did. The paragraphs were fluent and the opening sentence was interesting. Your writing had a steady rythmn that was very elegant. I love your writing style it's very unique, very...flowing and descriptive but harsh. Do you know what I'm saying?

This is a review for the HPFC Want More Reviews? Forum.

Really good. I really like how you wrote this without any dialouge at all. :D

It would be weird to say that it's beautiful LOL man I lack sleep I swear XD no seriously, it's excellent, I could see the picture reflected in the help she seeked in his gaze and the way that simple connection made her stand straight again, made her fight back, made her follow him until the end, an end where he was bound to follow her. You choose a couple I didn't see coming XD and that's one of your best qualifities that I adore, your quill is unexpected and I find that I love surprises! Great work! challenge completed, thank you for your valuable participation ;)