that was BEAUTIFUL!

So beautiful!

Okay, you are the one person that gets me confused all the time. You make me burst out laughing and you make me cry. WHAT THE FREAKING HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?

*sob* Poor Ian and Amy! *sob*

Oh geez, this is an awesome story, I always know when a fanfic is good when I feel tears. Please keepwriting.

And now, I'm writing with tears in my eyes. Whenever it's a sad story, and it's a songfic, of they mention a song to go with it, I listen to that song. WAH!

~LOP

oh wow.

That was sad and beautiful. Major tear jerker!

WAH!

I weep...

Well, I didn't actually weep, but that was effing sad.

[Insert sniffle]

POOR IAN!

Spasm...

*sob sob sob* that is so sad! i almost cried. and i'm one of the people who almost NEVER cry. Great tearjerker. good job!

OMG! That is THE saddest story I have ever read! I LOVE IT! Write more!

This is really nicely written. I liked it, I didn't cry, but I liked it. I especially loved your bittersweet ending. I also liked how the guy's named is Ivan :)

Even though this is a one-shot, I suggest you fix your spacings. This fic has too many "enters". Combine some of your paragraphs.

Spelling and grammar was OK, and your storyline was cute, but not exactly original.

Overall it was good, keep practicing.

Keep writing and have a nice day.

~Summer

"I read with tears in my eyes"

IAN! NO! WHY IAN WHY? GAH!

That was probably the closest I have ever come to crying while reading a fanfic. It was depressing- but I still loved it. IAN WHY!

Pardon my sobs and wails of grief.

I need to listen to that song.

Now I'm depressed...IAN!

OK, sorry for that crazy review- good job! You're going to get a LOT of sobbing/wailing reviews similar to mine.

IAN? NO! WHY, IAN! PLEASE!

*sobs loudly*

Good job!

Oh my God, this was so, so good, but so, so sad.