I'm quite amazed that you managed to write such a well-rounded, sweet story in this few words. Wow.

wow. usually i'm not to impressed with really short stories like this because they don't capture enough emotion, detail or anything. but this... this was perfect. the format was perfect. the words and sentences and the way u used them and put them together was perfect. It was only 10 sentences long and it told me everything i needed to know. it is simplely perfect:) great job:)

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Raine

Cute, some time harry is very close to ron, and when ron come back harry feel like he can do anything

That is so cute. Sure, I think the pairing would never work, but it's a really good story. I love the last line, and it took me a few moments to get it, but when I did, the GinnyNeville pairing just sort of fit. Maybe it has something to do with the happy song that's playing, but I think it's just your writing.

It's really good,

CKC

I love this story! It's the epitome of short and sweet, and I love the format you used... definitely a favorite!

Aw! I normally like to only read original pairings, but this was so super sweet, I couldn't resist!

*lost*