Okay, now I understand...nothing, I still don't get it. So Ace was a chick in this one? What the hell is going on?

This is getting very confusing. Once this is finished, make a dot point summary of what the hell was going on.

So Teach showed up again. And Sogeking and Usopp have a doorway in their heads, not a split personality per se but the same person, in two different worlds, you've actually turned this into an explanation for Sogeking in canon, a surprising twist and very well done. Congratulations.

I'm guessing Garp is the zombie grandpa, the kids are the Supernovas and the One Piece world is more closely connected to this one than we thought. This story is a melding of the two worlds but there appears be doorways and windows into the pure, original, canon One Piece world. Sounds like fun.

You are in a WASTELAND. For f*ck's sake, point it to where you to go, block the wheel so it stays in a straight line and use a rock to weigh down the accelerator. Everyone lives. People really don't think very well in this world.

He's still got the Afro right? It's not Brook without the Afro. And yes the Afro is important enough to warrant the use of a capital letter.

Wow. Its getting really hard to say anything about this story, its just too good. You've perfectly blended the two worlds and adapted some more, you are on par with DreadGod's story "King of the Wastes". Well done.

Wow. Just...wow.

So, Zoro's stuck in Asurus mode, except he looks like Hachi, Teach is still an as$hole, Usopp's super speed is a mutation and he's got a more intense split personality than canon. This is going to be fun.

From the context, in this were a 'canon-path' story, then this would be a month after the Water 7 'incident'.

HUUUU- I feel completely mindblown. This is the first time I read such a dark story in the OP universe and it is SCARY. I'm so used to the happy, bright OP world that Oda-sensei made that this sstory completely fried my brains.

Usopp/Sogeking is COMPLETELY kick-ass here. And that connection between different dimensions; I feel so bad for the Vault-suits to see their (more fortunate) counterparts. My heart bleeds for Luffy. D;

Fantastic, FANTASTIC language here. You had me at the first sentence in the first chapter. Completely overwhelming and dark, but very original.

I really, really hope you'll find the time to update soon!

Sweet! I cannot wait for the next chapter! The way you write the twisting remains of sanity these raiders share is beautiful. You have a real knack for writing!

Thanks!

-curledruler

Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.

This is nuts as always. Now old Teach is going to crash the negotiations before they even properly start. So is vault Luffy is kid is Traffie right?

The darker emotion in this chapter made for some nice contrast to the humor in the new chapter of other story. Great work as usual.

Ja ne

Sorakage Sama

Madness, grief and violence. I think I need something fluffy to cling to now. D:

Poor D. Luffy. It's marvellous work, no doubt there but all the same I'm going to angst like there's no tomorrow. XD

Interesting to see it from the other side. :3

OH! MAN! how exciting! i got confused for a while, but seriously! this is some great shit! I LOVE YOU!

I just love how death is described. It necessitates flaily fangirly-ness. XD

Luffy in denial! D: Ace will save them all! (I kinda really want to see that now and Sabo appears with Ace. God, Sabo makes me far too happy just by appearing.)