Reviews for All Wrapped Up
justanotherdreamgirl chapter 2 . 4/16/2015
That was so awesome! But I kind if feel bad for Fuery, he had to wrap all those tools! But that was just perfect what Ed gave Winry to make up what he said to her. But then Winry revealed what she was hiding and the advice Riza gave her. That was pure genius!
justanotherdreamgirl chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Wow, that was really a good story! But I do want to beat up Ed either way. I can't believe him! How is he so dumb!? He shouldn't have tookem his anger out on Winry, he should have dealt with it. But I can wait till the next chapter! I can't wait to see how everything turns out!
shamanuniverse chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
wow your writing is amazing!
ninjas-are-everywhere chapter 2 . 2/19/2012
Awwww! What he did with the wrench was so sweet!
JayEmGee chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
nothing felt better than having a pipsqueak subordinate do all your paperwork...

except a mandatory miniskirt policy! lawl.

always enjoying your style of writing. :)
Anonymoose13 chapter 2 . 10/11/2010
This was amazing! The fight scene was so good it almost made me want to cry! (in a good way;) plu I liked the disclaimer in the first chapter: Tall but still with a short complex! Genious! You're a very talented author! Great job!
it's simply me chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
Another awesome story! And two chapters this time, too! I love your stuff! Onto the next one :D
Akina chapter 2 . 7/26/2010
hehe roys such a sucker for romance, huh?
Akina chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
eeeekkk! this is so cute! why ed why? why couldnt you just give her the tools! she wouldve been so happy
emiopsfanfics chapter 2 . 7/13/2010
So effin' cute! XD Ed is such a keeper!
Madik chapter 2 . 7/10/2010
Epic story! I love it, although I have to say that has to be the longest hug scene I've ever read (; Totally in love with your writing, keep it up!
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 2 . 7/10/2010
D'awww!XDDD I love it! Lols.. Al in a skirt. XD Quite a site.

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Take it like men! 8U

Lols. I love it! XD

Ari chan
BlackHayate13 chapter 2 . 7/1/2010
"ALPHONSE WHEN I CATCH YOU I'M GOING TO TRANSMUTE YOUR LOINCLOTH INTO A SKIRT!"

LOL!

Because Alphonse is Deaaad Sexy...

hehe, In a miniskirt.

XDD
Gerti chapter 2 . 6/12/2010
Heh, this is a really good story!

The characters are done well and it's well-written...

Write more! :)
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