I know you'll probably never read this review, but I just felt like I had to point out that Ares and Apollo actually have had a proper fight in the past, when Apollo beat him in a boxing match in the first olympic games. Also, Apollo should have put up a WAY better fight against Ares in this chapter, especially since he knew the entire multiverse was on the line. Word of god says Ares is sort of a chump among the Olympians (at least in the Percy Jackson verse) while Apollo is the most powerful son of Zeus. So it just feels a bit odd that Ares had Apollo on the backfoot for most of their fight.

. . . Gods can't interfere directly they say . . . Did Eris miss that memo?

Wait you do realize Nico is gay right

Cthulhu.

Don't know if you'll ever see this review seeing that its been 8 years since you published this, but I read the first 3 books today, and I gotta say I loved them. First started reading this out of curiosity but you've got some amazing work here. Kept me interested the whole way and I liked everything about it. Great job! Im definitely going to keep reading.

Congratulations! You’re officially an eldritch abomination by virtue of existing OUTSIDE!

Hey, hey, hey! Just coming by and hitting you up with the good job even though this is my second time reading this story!

Are you serious!?, mixing the Greeks with Artemis Fowl? Hey I like the normal story, not so confusing that way. Thank you very much.

The best Monty Python reference I've heard.

My two favourite books ever!

Okay I just want to say, this series is fantastic. I realize I still have 2 more books to go but what I've read so far is some of the best fanfiction I've ever read. I don't know if you've ever read The Bartimaeus Trilogy or not (I highly, highly recommend it if you have not) but Armani reminds me a great deal of Bartimaeus. I love his dry, sarcastic sense of humor, as well as his sometimes cynical attitude. For some reason, the line "You know, I can't help but get the feeling I've done something to antagonize you" from Book 2 when Nico is threatening Armani made me laugh out loud. It's a perfect example of that type of humor that I love. But I also like that Armani can be serious when he wants to, just as Bartimaeus; he doesn't take things seriously very often, but it's because of that fact that when he does, it really means something. Anyways, just wanted to leave those thoughts here, and I'm looking forward to finishing the series.

p.s. I'm also a huge fan of Artemis Fowl myself :) ...But seriously, read the Bartimaeus books if you haven't. They're fantastic. Just like your fanfiction :)

The references are so real. Also, you are combining of my fav series, so well done, thank you. The earlier line about an Irish mastermind and his group of fairies was referring to this, i guess?

One day I hope these stories get published because you have amazing writing skills

i was literally sobbing at the end of this. i read three books about him, and now he dies?

OH MY GOODNESS YES PLEASE. GIVE ME SOME ARTEMIS FOWL.