GOD IM SCREAMING NARUSASU IS REAL EVERY1

This was like poetry! I loved it

Beautiful. Also lovely and sweet and bittersweet and more. Cheers and ta for posting this lovely story.

Omg I the feels :'(

please continue it like make the other part on sasuke point of view on being married then if either they ended together because sasuke got divorced or ended seperate because sasike felt in love with her or couldnt bare to bring disgrace to his family

it's so sad!

Huh. So Sasuke got Merried and went away in the end... WHAT HAPPENS THEN?! ugh. Open endings are hard to handle.

that was a piece of crap ending

That was so sweet and sad that it actually made me tear up a little.
I loved it. please don't ever change or edit this. I think it's perfect just as it is. :)

I think the overall story was great but...there were a few things that I felt may not have been grammatically correct..or whatever...like when you say "You put down his bag" it has to be "your bag" cuz your talking about Sasuke's bag and the 'you' is Sasuke isn't it? Well some of the stuff like that was kinda confusing...

But other than that I felt it was a very sweet and real story. Kinda Sad but in a...not...sad (I suck at description) kind of way.

One of the things I like about this story is how raw it is. It seems unhinged and a little broken: just on the verge of being angsty. The style of the writing is unique and because it feels like it hasn't been perfected, it gives off a shaky feel that I've always been a sucker for.

I think you painted Sasuke's character really well in this story. Yeah, it isn't the Sasuke we all know, but it's believable. The reader can understand Sasuke's insecurities about their relationship.

Same basic thing with Naruto's character, even though he was almost a little too... dependent. Just a little bit.

Other than that, good job. Lovely story.

Aww this was heart breaking! Did they end up together in the end?

BWUAHAHA I'm back.

Anyways. This actually reminds me of a situation my friends were in a while back. I won't go into details (it's not my place) or anything. I just thought I'd let you know.

This story was kinda easy to relate to. I mean, I've never been in a gay relationship before (or any, at all) that ruined my reputation, but still. I got into this story.

haha. Anyways, keep up the good work! You're a great writer. :D

i really luved it!

really sweet and fluffy and it gave me WAFFS!

cute story!

Huwaaahhhh...this is sad TT_TT

I like your style you know...and Sasuke in this fic, it tortured me. He's like hot and cold. Poor Naruto. Well, this is real world, you're telling this story just like what happens in real world when two men fall in love. It's difficult to get together.

I love this fic. Good job!Keep it up!