Another amazingly written story! You really nailed their characters! I love how Mai is using these weapons to protect Zuko, and I love that Teo is making weapons for defense, not offense! Really, really good job, author! :D

NEAT

I LOVE IT! Nobody writes Mai and Tao things- well, except for Bananas- but even if they did, I don't think they'd be able to pull it off so awesomely as you do. No amount of cookies can amount to the amazingness that is this. PLEASE, TAKE A MONKEY MUFFIN FOR YOUR AMAZING JOB.

And remember, look both ways before crossing the street! :D

Consider yourself FAVORITED!

Spry!

Excellent one shot.

I can definitely see Mai looking for better weapons to protect herslef and Zuko from assassins who might get past their guards while they sleep at night.

However, I would like to make a note of the fact that Zuko is actually a very light sleeper. In cannon when the pirates who Zhao hired to kill him planted explosives on his ship to blow it up he survived because he heard them eventhough they were really quite.

I love it. I love everything about this piece!

I love third relationship and the reason for her visits.

Very unique. Very well written. Perfect!

LOL Cute! X3

Really nice one shot.

I feel guilty whenever I do a favorite-and-run, even though it's what I was about to do. So... I had to say something.

First off, an internet cookie for having Teo in a fic. He's my favorite character... Another internet cookie for having Teo in character. And a third internet cookie for actually thinking of this.

I still love this one. :) From the natural characterizations, to the great idea for Northern Air Temple's new product line, it was both interesting and fun. And, of course, gold stars go out for both getting Mai and making Teo interesting.

Nicely done! Very plausible, too.

Awesome, not bad at all. I'd give you somewhere between an A and an A-.

Your spelling and punctuation is great, but there is one section where you should put a comma in. Just skim over it again. Mai and Teo are IC, and I liked what you did with Teo's character. It was very nice since we don't see enough of him in the series.

It was cute. That's not usually a pair I see together in fics a lot.

Keep writing and have a nice day.

~Summer