Are you trying to make me hate you?

:)

Eeeeppppp I loved it cuz all the other fics always placed scorpius in slytherin and I was so happy when he was on griffindor!

Omg it was amazing and I am about to read your other fic. Would you mind checking out my fic the marauders daughters please! :D

Becca

I actually like this one :) You should try and write more ff's :)

Let me just tell you that you can't tell that this is your first. This is really good (my first fic was screwed)

lol score grew up on a farm?

That's right... raise your voice, Scorpius, raise it!

AW wittle Scrpy proved a point! YAY!
That was cute, I liked it, it'd be cool if there was a sequel though, thats something to think about ;P
Anywyas, good job!
-JuicyPumpkin

Haha nice, can't wait for the spaz :)

Looking forward to reading more.

-JuicyPumpkin

It was good.

Only, I would think Scorpious to have a bit more backbone ya know.

Also you should try and elaborate a bit more and don't be afraid to give details.

For example don't just describe a persons hair and eyes. Try throwing in face shape, body build, attitude, or even thier smell in the description. I find it helps me to get a better picture of the person.

Great job so far.

I'm looking foward to the rest of the story.

:)

I liked it.

Instead of "proudness" you could use "pride"

Other than that it was very good.

I've always liked the idea that Scorpious and Albus become friends.

Good Job.

:)

That was enjoyable, it seems like that would actually happen.

I would however like to see aboit of character development, so I think a second chapter would be a good idea, and I encourage you to keep on writing fanfiction!

Keep up the good work!

-JuicyPumpkin