Reviews for Enemy of the State
Sturnidae chapter 5 . 6/29/2016
please update soon!
Kiarene chapter 4 . 4/19/2015
Great story! Love the plot twists, the mix of canon and AU.
Phoenix's Inferno chapter 5 . 1/19/2014
interesting story! but are you going to ever update?
Kitkat3195 chapter 5 . 8/10/2013
NO NO NO..this amazing story cannot end here! :(
I really hope that you will continue this fic one day.
featherwingg245 chapter 5 . 7/8/2013
You didn't update in a while, but still faving and following. I hope you do soon!
firerose132 chapter 5 . 4/14/2013
I love how you wrote light as the leader of the gang, he's a gangster man :D
NekkiYaoi chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
I'm sad... Why did you stop here? * Tears in her eyes *

I love the ''Never Calls Teru Teru Game'', is funny X3

If you have time to write, it would be great to continue this. I love it, the traumatized-Light, Horny-Teru (Let my Light-kun alone Dx!), Servant-L.

And like others said, L should give Light a kiss and a hug. Poor cute little Light... raped, kidnapped and lost. Now I'm wondering how did he meet Taro-kun (If Lawli plays, I play too :3!) and what happened to Light's family.

Please Could you please update it someday?
PurpleSong chapter 5 . 12/24/2012
So there is a death note but no shinigami with it? Please update! Ganbatte sensei
Gala chapter 2 . 12/10/2012
WHY!?
I live in America and enjoy watching Anime and Manga,and I love when they make a horrible remake like they did to Death Note and Dragon Ball Z,THE MACHINEGUNS ARE COMING OUT
m3 chapter 5 . 11/26/2012
waaaaat? come on! u haven't updated for ...two... years?...
but i really want the rest...i want the rest :(((((
Wind Whisperer chapter 5 . 10/7/2012
I hope this will be continued some day. I really like it. :)
pokemaster101 chapter 5 . 6/9/2012
L-kun needs to give Light-chan a hug. And a kiss. And more. 3

I LOVE An Apple A Day! I'm thinking on reading it again...8)

Oi! Me is impatient. See? Me no use propr gramr and speling. Plz update. Tis been over 2 years, ne? Pleeeeeaaasssssse? L puppy dog face
Siri02 chapter 5 . 5/27/2012
I absolutely love the idea for this story and I hope you'll continue this!
Chellyisback chapter 5 . 4/7/2012
urgh, why good writers allways stop their stories? im depressed!
kay-kw33n chapter 5 . 12/30/2011
More pls ! Pls more!
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