Reviews for Paragon
animeroxz chapter 1 . 6/13/2018
Aww I love it!
LemonLily chapter 1 . 6/13/2018
I adore the simplicity of this. Great job!
CherCee chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
This is cute
Fher34 chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
Sly, I like it. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
Aww
Yanirca chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
awwwww i loved the ending sooo kawaiiiiiii!.
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
I liked it :)

Well done!

I think you beautifully described Hinata, and yeah, their loss is indeed his gain
Tifa Lockhart Valentine chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Great story!

Love this way of showing how Shikamaru sees Hinata. I would love to see how they would be together.

Grats on a well written story in 300 words!
Lionasha No Bruja chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
I *want* to like this pairing, I really do, and this is so well written. But... the way Shikamaru describes his perfect woman comes from sexist chauvinism (I have no idea WHY the Nara men are sexist, but they are). He values Hinata because she won't push him, won't nag him, won't "trouble" him, even if he deserves it, even if she's unhappy.

I can see this pairing working, maybe. But for all the wrong reasons.
Michie Kiyomi chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Aw, this is so nice! I like how your wrote everything. Truly wonderful.
Acumichi chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
so cute, you have atalent for that _
harley944 chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
cute
naruhinafan93 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
LOL ah so true. Only a genius like shikamaru would notice Hinata in that perspective. i really like this short story.
SaltyDishwater chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Awe that was so cute! I've always liked this pairing. :) Great job.

Oh and I think you're the 100th completed fix in the Shika/Hina fandom. Awesome!

~Salma
sonofafluffymuffin chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
wow! Never heard of this pairing before! But it just seems to fit, in a weird way...
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