I am wordless. I enjoyed it. Terribly wonderful. How painful.

Families and friends are permanently torn aperture by one vicious outburst, now this to get over and block until something mire rending cuts the brothers asunder.

Sam is right, if Dean knew about the stabbing his older brother would more than break, he would shatter. There is a reason our minds protect us with blocks.

Voice, pacing, Sam's fighting skills, lethal to all that cross their path will never out match his brother's prowness.

Dean is Achilles facing Hector beneath Troy's high walls.

This wasn't fanfiction. This wasn't literature. This was a slice of art formed by the hands of an angel. I REALLY enjoyed reading this story! Your pacing and descriptions colored the story like the finest of paints. My heart hurt for Sam-as it did throughout Season 5.
To sum it up: delicious.
Thank you so much for taking the time and effort to write and post such a wonderful story. :)

Oh my gosh... This... THIS. I DONT EVEN HAVE WORDS! Please, for the love of all that is bright and beautiful in this world, and my sanity, WRITE A SEQUEL!
I really, REALLY feel like Dean has to find out. I know that it would devestate him and heck- he probably WOULD cry! But that doesn't change the fact that he should know, you know? I say this because this event, this horrible thing that Sam has gone through? Would SERIOUSLY effect him and how he reacts to Dean being around him! We are talking nightmares, flashbacks, and moments he forgets he doesn't have to be afraid anymore! DX
Just like the voicemail that Dean never learned of, i think this too would continue to hurt Sam for a long time! And although Sam wants to be brave and protect Dean from that at the cost of himself, I think by Dean knowing, Sam could truly begin to heal. Otherwise, he's gonna have that "secret" stuck inside him and when he is relieving it, he needs Dean to know what's going on so he can help him! Bobby isn't always gonna be within reach...

So yeah! Can you please do that for me? It would make me SERIOUSLY happy!
Normally I try not to let myself get too worked up over fanfics but I swear, your little story? I felt like I was watching an episode! And just like with the series, im now hooked... T.T
You captured every emotion perfectly and flawlessly- it felt like i was really there! Same with the characters! You took some of my favorite characters and you did them the BEST of justices! I swear, if this ever happened in the show, this is exactly how they would react.
AWESOME JOB! You should be soooooo proud of yourself for writing this jem of a story! ITS FANTASTIC! XDDD
Everything was just so realistic, deep, and RAW- you just cant find that quality of writing very often. ;D
And your writing style is so incredible- I had no doubt as to what was happening and all your words just flow together beautifully! I HAD SO MAY FEELS WHILE READING THIS! T0T
*sniffles* You are an amazing story teller! TT

When I first clicked on this fix I hoped it would be good, but no one could have prepared me for it being THAT good! Man! I'm just so depressed now that its over...
So please! Please write more! I literally CANNOT get enough of your work! CX
I'm off to go read your other stories! I'm really excited too- I mean, if this little story was THIS GOOD, what will your other stories be like?
If they are anything remotely like this one, I know I will love them. :)
Again, GREAT JOB and I hope to be seeing more of this (or any other new ideas you have) soon!

This is an amazing story, and really, if the hunters wanted to hurt Sam, it couldn't have worked out better for them. It was agonising. But like many others, I'm left wanting more, which I guess is exactly what you want as an author. But...I really, really want more in this one.

I kinda feel like Dean might knows he's the one that stabbed Sam, but then again, maybe he doesn't. But I feel like he'll figure it out. And I want him to. I want him to know that Sam wanted to keep that burden from him, while he's carrying all those other burdens that really aren't all his, which is utterly heartbreaking. So while Dean is off licking his wounds, feeling sad that his brother is scared of him, Sam is literally carrying the weight of the world on his shoulders, believing every single word Dean said to him while sparing him any further pain by withholding the full knowledge of all he truly did. And knowing the curse was meant for him in the first place just reinforces in Sam's mind just how deserving he is of every bit of pain and torment that comes his way.

Honestly, my heart weeps for Sam! You do these kinds of heart wrenching tales of woe to perfection! A

I enjoyed this story, but I can't help feeling something is seriously missing. Dean has been gone for 6 days. How does Sam get him back? How do they get past this? You can't just leave them separated and hurting!

so painful, angst, sacrifice, love... it's perfect, but I wish you continue it

This is such a good story. Full of angst. I know a lot of other reviewers have said the same thing but have you considered doing a sequel to this or even a one-shot? I feel like there just needs to be something more to expand on that ending to help the brothers.

I reeeeeeeaaaaaally want a sequel to this!

This was fabulous! The imagery was stunning and the anguish, on all sides, heartbreaking. Did you ever consider continuing this plot line? I would love to read it, if you ever do!

Read it again after reading it about a week ago. I realized I forgot to put it on my favorite list. Also I forgot to mention that I thought this was really interesting - not to mention heartbreaking - but a really interesting concept to make a story of.

PS: Stupid site won't let us review a chapter more than once.

PPS: I want a sequel to this (I say sequel, but really any story dealing with the stuff that happened in this story will do :) ...so kinda like a tribute to your own story - which isn't corny at all)

Cheers.

Andi.

Ok, I'm gonna check out your profile now, and I swear to God if there isn't a story where Dean finds out and Sam feels better I'm gonna cry...harder.

This story was fantastic. I loved it beginning to end. Sam's struggle to deal with Dean's words and actions and Dean's guilt, along with Castiel's stoic helpfulness and Bobby's fatherly understanding made for the perfect combo. The only thing I have to complain about is that I only wish there was more.

ahhh, it is so nice, to see some of what i think Sammy deserves, come to him don't you think?

i mean seriously, its just too bad Dean's dying, though i have to admit i am a bit of a sucker for a hurt dean, only two things better i think.

Dean hurting Sam, and Dean/Jo wild crazy monkey love.. i realize that last one might not be something, that should be shared exactly, but its the truth..

anyway looove the story, so far, keep up the great work.

Oh wow. This was so powerful and just beautiful. I truly enjoyed reading this. The emotions throughout are so raw and written wonderfully well. I found myself almost crying for Sam and later for Dean when he discovered what he had done. The idea of Cas tending Sam was a new idea that I liked as well. Over all this was such a clever plot line. I'm glad I stumbled upon this!