| Reviews for What Falls Away |
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EvilReceptionistOfDoom chapter 1 . 11/15/2016 Oh, there's still plenty of angst. ;) Pooooooooooooooooor Tanda. Also, Balsa seems to have confused "friend" with "friends with benefits". XDDDD This was good, though - some great lines, and again... poooooooooor poor Tanda. At least he gets some good sex out of the arrangement. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2016 Please Make more |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2016 I rather enjoyed this, it was very well written. I admit I came looking for a smut-fic but this was arguably better by a long shot. I like your depictions of the characters and the love scene was very well done. Keep up the good work! |
AddictedFangirl101 chapter 1 . 9/3/2015 This is really good. The writing quality, the plot line, your story is just written so beautifully written. |
ashleyjordan chapter 1 . 7/6/2014 So glad to first of all even find a fic for this lovely series and for a mature one like this surveying their unrequited relationship. I was very pleased that you depicted her as the aggressor that she is, it is quite unsatisfying when you read stories when the characters are not true to their nature. I found it very touching that you allowed them to reunite, at least here we can believe that they finally unite. Great work and thanks for the story! |
DreamP346 chapter 1 . 6/5/2012 I don't know many people who are fans of this show, but I'm glad you are. Nice little oneshot. Both are truly in character. |
linsadair chapter 1 . 5/31/2011 Ugh, Balsa. He loves you! Give in already! |
unkeptsecret chapter 1 . 4/24/2010 So, yes, this is lemon-y, but it's sweet. Lemonade? Possibly. I keep coming back to this corner of ffnet, hoping that someone has taken up the banner for this pairing, and frankly, this is the good stuff. More please, with a side of plot! |
hotcocoalatte chapter 1 . 4/4/2010 I've never heard of this manga/show?, but I enjoyed the story. Makes me want to read/watch whatever this is. :D |