That gave me a huge scare! But thank God she is going to be treated! I read about this disease and how it killed most of who died in the Civil War. So it really is bad, sometimes I wish these two characters weren't so stubborn! But at the end it worked out and she got his jacket!

THAT WAS SO CUUTE! I. JUST. LOVE. YOUR. STORY. You write really good EdxWin fanfics :)

Holy crap this is amazing! Not only is the storyline great but it is extremely well written... This is the kind of fic I scour for, one like an actual published book, not text lingo

Ahhh, that's what the title was referring to! This was a very cute little moment between Ed and Winry, and it was sweet to see Ed fussing over Winry for once, instead of the other way around, as is usual.

This...was...so...cute! SQUEE! xD once again, your characterization skills amaze me.

That was so adorable! It was really well written and Ed's concern over Winry was so frickin' cute! Great Job!

please please continue this ppppplllleeeeaaassseeeee!

That is so adorable! Thank you so much for writing this! It's really well done! I'd even read a sequel to this is you were willing to write it. I loved the bit where 'Winry's fever worsened'.

-Ash

Adorable. Thankyou

I love this! Perfect amount of romance; not TOO fluffy, and plenty of obvious hints. And for some reason, I've grown accicted to FanFics about people getting sick. LoL!

I just have one question... Is this first chapter all there is?

Thank youu! Love this! 8D

Jinx

I like this! A simple plot, yet full of emotion and whatnot that were portrayed in a completely believable way. awesome!

awww this one was so cute! it gave me a fuzzy feel inside! :D

Unbelievable cute and lovely and well written! Amazingly done once again!

Aww..!

Ari chan

This was so cute! Great job, I loved it.