Loveditloveditloveditlovedit!

You captured Amy really perfectly; her lonliness, confusion and frustration especially.

My favorite 11th Doctor story so far. Hope you do some more for the next episodes because you write so well.

You should do one from Rory's perspective.

Thanks for giving me such a great read.:)

Have you tried Fish Fingers in Custard? And liked them? In which case, take this review and be happy. :)

I really liked that story! It was really good, I think you wrote Amy really well. :)

Awesome idea and I liked how you wrote Amelia Pond. Thanks for writing.

I like this, it gives us a sort of in depth look at Amy's character.

fish custard tastes great.

what did you all think of the new doctor? I loved it and I love Amy too, she's cool!

That was amazing. Exactly the read I'm getting off Amy, not that we know much of her, but it seems exactly what we do know. Gosh. It's like a summary (only avoiding all the episode-plot bits) of the episode, and utterly brilliant. Makes me want to re-watch the episode in order to get some of my OWN inspiration. But it won't be as good as this.

Lucy

I really enjoyed reading this. It was fun to read it from Amy's POV. Great job!

Fish fingers dipped in custard... That must be the strangest craving anyone who isn't pregnant could ever have. :P

Wowzee! This was really naiice & sweet! You wrote this from Amy's perspective groovyliciously - and as a whole 'twas all written very well!

Can't wait till episode2 of DW now! _

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"Aren't you going to turn your back?" Rory asked from beside me. His own back turned away from the Doctor as he changed.

I smiled, taking in the Doctor with appreciative eyes. "No."

Oh, he was most definitely real.

*laughs uncontrollably*

I LOVED the rest of the fic. 'Twas amazing!

Aww that was really nice, it's early days but I think you captured amy brilliantly. Keep it up! :) x

This was great :D! It's great showing how Amelia/Amy was feeling throughout those moments :D!

i LOVE this- please continue (i love the new doctor!) :) although maybe you could also write about we don't see in the episode(s)? just a suggestion- i hope this was helpful, sorry i am not very good at reviews! but i love it so far, the writing style is amazing:)

Well this was just lovely (:

I love 11th Doctors stories, they are just so fairytale like. You wrote Amy beautifully - fiesty yet wistful, just like she was on the show. Your style flowed really well and I loved the little snapshots we got (: Especially the one where he was changing, haha.

-adds to faves-

x

OMG I loved the new episode and great job on this... Would this be called a story? Anyway, great job with the lines, none of that paraphrasing stuff!