This is perfect! We all knew that Captain Kuchiki just needed to get laid. And, as always, Renji was very respectful and caring with his vulnerable captain. The only thing missing is a second chapter. Would love to see how their intimate relationship mellows the strict noble.

First of all, I read and reviewed this over a year ago, before I was a member. This story is every bit as beautiful and sexy and heart-touching and hot as it was the first time. The desire to help his captain drives Renji to his side, and Byakuya accepted him and it's just so touching, and then omg you put in that glorious lemon and it is a perfect story!
AND, you have few, if any, mistakes and to me, that takes this fic from a 10 to an 11 :)
Would love to see a follow-up, though it ended wonderfully 'Ya're mine' 'Hai' AWWWWWW!
I just think it'd be cool to see a follow-up, with Bya doing better with Renji at his side and their feelings developing more. Sorry, I'm a romantic worrier, and want to see Bya doing better than he was at the beginning :)

Beautiful!

I love this so much! Not only was it absolutely hot as hell, but it was so sweet, too, and that can be tricky to pull off. But you did so good...very few fics can get me frisky AND put tears in my eyes. Very, very well done!

Thanks so much for this! I enjoyed a lot reading it. It was perfect, you described the characters so well that they are in-character. And that's a difficult thing to do, specially with Byakuya.

damn beautiful :333 perfection in itself :333.. and now that i expressed what i feel about it, please allow me to enter.. fangirl mode. i want moreeeeeee! ... please?

brb thanking god u exist

That was awesome, cute and excellent, I loved it and nice job but you should write another RENbya fic soon please

Despite my typical 50K words/ hour reading speed, this piece, these 6.6K words took me about an hour to fully digest and reread.

It was that good. Like, THAT good.

I should probably praise you on how you got the characterization down to a T, or how your writing is so brilliant I'm lost. But frankly, I can't express how good, how absolutely freaking BRILLIANT your writing is. It's like, I, as a reader, actually feel everything your characters go through, and it's a roller coaster ride. And that applies to all your work.

I remember being captivated by 'Sinner' years ago, but I was too silly too click on the author link to read more of your work, and that was on a FF account that I forgot about. Today, I randomly found 'Sinner' again, and yeah, yet another masterpiece. I'll be reading more tomorrow, since it's 3:00AM now.

I really, really, really love your work.

And you're probably loling your head off about "dat sillies" if you ever read this review u-u.

I seriously think this is the best writing of Byakuya I've read. You did a great job at keeping him in character while still having the relationship. I love it! You should continue you this if you haven't (I haven't read all of the fics for Ren/Bya yet so I don't know if you have). Also, your dialogue is brilliant and your sex scene, it actually seems real. You should write on your own if you don't already, you could manage one hell of a novel.

SO awesome.

This was such a sweet story. Been a bit of a Byakuya fan-girl, reading the way you described him and all the weight he has to carry...that was beatiful in a painful way.

See? Definitely a favourite. :D

This is such an amazing story. Seriously one of the best Renji/Byakuya fanfictions I have ever read. Wonderful job. :)

I love it, the plot is good as well as the fact that the character aren't OOC, they could be, taking note of some things, but by giving background of the why's and how they said it, it makes it not that way(I know babbling is my habit).

thanks for the amaaazing story