Yeah. You just don't take Hades from Train. Not a good idea. I'm definitely interested in more, but I have to tell you, I'm much more familiar with Black Cat than I am with Stargate. hoping you decide to continue this story! Keep up the good work!

I really like the idea, but the chapter needs desperately needs to be reformated. Every new line of dialogue needs to be a new line. For example from the second paragraph you wrote:

"Do we know where this kid came from or what he was doing chasing Bal? Also has either of our guests said anything yet?" "Both are negative sir. The kid is still out and Bal has been quiet." Daniel had been the first to answer but Jack was next. "What I want to know is what the kid was doing with a gun. That's no pop cap." Before anything else could be said the phone rang. "General it's the boy. He's escaped. He knocked us out and when we woke up he was gone." "Is everyone alright?" "Yeah we're fine but I don't know where he went." "Ok. Thank you." There was a siren that went off. They all hurried to the gate room to see a blonde girl step through with an older man. "Are you sure he's here?"

The actual format should be:

"Do we know where this kid came from or what he was doing chasing Bal? Also has either of our guests said anything yet?"

"Both are negative sir. The kid is still out and Bal has been quiet." Daniel had been the first to answer but Jack was next.

"What I want to know is what the kid was doing with a gun. That's no pop cap." Before anything else could be said the phone rang.

"General it's the boy. He's escaped. He knocked us out and when we woke up he was gone."

"Is everyone alright?"

"Yeah we're fine but I don't know where he went."

"Ok. Thank you." There was a siren that went off. They all hurried to the gate room to see a blonde girl step through with an older man. "Are you sure he's here?"

ahh Train...so cute, nee? GOOD STORY SO FAR! PLEASE UPDATE!

update soon!

This sounds funny!

..it reminds me that I never finished watching the anime..

Well, I'm puting it on the To Do List now..

Please update soon again!

:3

Awesome story! I cant wait to read more so please update soon.

Really like where you're going with this, everyone was in character and a few bits made me chuckle. Just a tip, start a new paragraph every time someone speaks and indicate who it was who spoke, it just makes it a little less confusing in those bits and easier to read. Other than that it was great!