It's the Teyrn and Teyrna, not just teyrn and teyrna. They're titles. Good story. Sad ending :(

hach Rory. I just installed the mod and am playing dragon age with it and just thought how perfect he is! Thank you for a nice fanfic for him.

Aww... so great! Today I installed the mod, and what should I say? Ser Gilmore is such a lovely person.

This pulled at me so deeply. He dared to love above his station.

Nicely written - I really liked this very much. A few typographical errors, but nothing serious. Very sweet!

Oh my, what a great story! I loved the NPC Mod as well, so it was wonderful having some of that translated. Poor Rory~

I love the mod, love Rory, and I love your story! Enjoyed it immensely!

beautifully written. what does the ser gilmore mod do anyway? i have the game for xbox360 so i cant do all the cool stuff like the pc game

Poor Ser Gilmore :'(

Really lovely story, and I'm now very jealous of the mods PC users can get, haha...The downside of the consoles, I think :P But enough of me moaning! This was so well written, especially at the end where the two meet again for the first time in months. Great work :D