Ok, I do realize I'm ridiculously late, finding this fanfic a decade after it's been published, but I got to write a review because you deserve a hundred. Thank you, thank you, thank you for sitting down to write OroSaku/DeiSaku fanfics, this is a blessing for all of us desperate shippers out there.

Your writing is beautiful and diverse and I loooove the way you portrayed both Sakura and Orochimaru. Gosh, I love that she's confident and has this no-nonsense air about her in your story, it's so rare writers do that and I love it. And Orochimaru is perfection too, you've captured his mysteriousness so well!

I am glad you shared this here! Thanks so much! I hope you haven't stopped writing altogether, you are so talented, goodness.

I give this oneshot a Hopefully you have plans for another with these two.

Please continue! OR please make another one!1

Holy crap! I love it! I kinda wish there were more OroSaku fics out there, and that others were as good as this one. But anyways. This is great!

too good

Awesome! I LOVE IT!

:)

Damn ur good i luvd it write sum more id luv to see sasuke-bastard get the hell beat out of him lol my dark side talkn but seriously ur great write sum more go orosaku .~

AWESOME

SO CUTE!

I love it!

Funny how the brain works against you? You never know what you might create when you finally listen to those inner voices.

Hell yes, I loved this oneshot-Orochimaru and Sakura all the way! Everyone to me seemed to be in character, especially Orochimaru, you portrayed him perfectly in this piece. Also, it was amusing when Sakura started going on her 'kill Sasuke' rampage-too bad Orochimaru had to stop her. But in the end, it was worth it.

Fine job here, I always love it when I can find some well-written OroSaku fanfics.

~~SpeedDemon315

that was sooo cute you should write more stories of this pairing.

Oh my goodness! I am in shock! This is most assuredly AMAZINGLY well written and completely in-character! I love it! :D

Wow...that was...amazing. It was written veerrry well and you really managed to capture Orochimaru's character. I loved it!

Aw~ That was cute! It was kind of difficult to understand who Sakura was talking about, but I knew it had to be either Sasuke or Kabuto. And why is Kabuto such a bitch around Sakura? He's WAY to jealous. Lol

Make more of these~ I miss OroSaku stories...

r u insane!

I didnt read ur story but sakura & Oorachimaru! ur insane!