| Reviews for And Every Breath We Drew was Hallelujah |
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Jet chapter 1 . 7/24/2016 Heartbreakingly beautiful. Three years after I first read this, and fell in love with it, nothing's changed. Thank you for writing something so beautiful. I'm still in that space between crying and contentment, because this is so realistic and brutally honest. Thank you |
corintios chapter 1 . 1/14/2015 Goddamit, that was so sad... I was utterly shocked at Hayato's death, never thought he'd be the first... My God, only 23... Hibari also hit me hard, I had a member of my family that disappeared and it took many years to confirm her death, this kind of situation is the hardest because you keep waiting and hoping and its horrible. Chrome's was really melancholic. Yamomoto's was... you could see how they were destroyed, you know? In a real world situation, this fic would be one of the most likely scenarios in Tsuna's life. I don't usually like to read things like this because I'm very emotional kind of person, but sometimes I can't resist. Well, You did a great job. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2014 Shit. My heart. Shit. I don't think I can breathe much longer. Shit, this just ripped my heart apart. Fucking hell. Hibari's death hit me the hardest, and not just because I like him the most. It was because I think he died forgotten for such a long time. And Lambo's loss of innocence was crushing. Gokudera's faith until the very end, Ryohei's undying dedication that ultimately ended with Tsuna losing not just him, but also his wife, and Chrome being resigned and succumbing to her illusions when she died in prison. And then there was Yamamoto, who couldn't keep up with all the deaths and broke in the end, I think he might have been in love with a Guardian, but I don't know who, and maybe that makes it just that much better. And still I think I might be crying when I read of Hibari's lonely death, because I think that must be the worst kind of death possible, but maybe his solitary death was a comfort to him. I think I'm crying. |
Sanauria chapter 1 . 5/15/2014 That was so depressing... But, I liked it! |
ichiruzuka chapter 1 . 8/30/2013 Every death is really painful, right? |
Alaude2019 chapter 1 . 7/20/2013 Really great story, made me cry ;_; So sad and moving. |
Moon's Smile chapter 1 . 5/21/2013 This fic...I almost cried. Almost. My eyes are blurry. This is absolutely wonderful. Terribly heart-breaking; I felt the pain when I read about each Guardian's death. It was unbelievably sad, but poetically written. This is something that I want to read over and over again, just because of the beauty of the words. You are truly talented. Lovely job. :) |
AppleDragon chapter 1 . 2/11/2012 This is amazing. It really is. You made me tear up - I've never done that while reading fanfiction before. Honestly, this story is just... amazing. Well done. |
Fluffness chapter 1 . 8/24/2011 ...This was a great fic. I didn't cry, but it made me feel terribly sad, and in my opinion that's very hard to do. The way it's so dark and realistic... I really do believe that every one of their deaths were so moving. Your writing skills are amazing. Thanks for writing this. |
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 7/16/2011 Brilliant~! Almost made me cry, ;) |
TenchiSaWaDa chapter 1 . 7/6/2011 Dark. Very dark indeed. Though i believe it ends without a message. The message at the end seems too forced as if Tsuna just blurts it out htere. still god though |
Prince SuperSharky chapter 1 . 6/28/2011 WHY YOU SUCH A GOOD WRITER? WHYYYYYYYY? This made me cry. I can't even comment more than that. This is angst, true angst, at its finest. |
Aadiana chapter 1 . 6/5/2011 Unbearably saddening. I thought Lambo'd die later, precisely because he's the youngest. . |
eloquentelegance chapter 1 . 5/31/2011 Beautiful, heart-wrenching and beautiful. Just wow. This was so good. I can't even... It hurt so well. Bravo |
Dashusi4ka chapter 1 . 2/7/2011 I cried.. |