Loving the story so far and very well done. Keep up the good work. Please update soon thank you. I Love the interactions with K-unit as well as when they interact with Alex.

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This is a good fan fic i can see it happening in the books.

I love this story! Plz update soon! I can’t wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work!

This is amazing!

This is a fantastic story! I hope there's more to come - I need to find out what happens to Alex...

I love this, your writing is very high quality, you could be a great author someday. I’d like to read how Alex got out of there, though the way you showed the aftermath was great. Thanks for all your hard work!

Im glad youre still writing this story, I really like it. Youre a really great writer and shouldnt criticize yourself as much, or think that its not good enough, youre definitely one of the better writers of FF. You say in your AN that its unedited as if you needed an excuse for why its badly written but it just mind blows us that something so good is unedited. Please keep updating.

Lol, there’s still plenty of people here. This is an incredible story so I doubt any of us will be leaving any time soon.

I loved this chapter and I’m excited to see what’ll happen next and how Alex managed to escape. Although one question, what year is this taking place? The Donald Trump bit had me shook, if Alex was born 1995 and he’s 17 years old, then it should be 2012. It’s weird to read about a real life person in a story such as this so you might want to do some editing. You are an incredible writer, and you can do this.

Overall super super chapter and I can’t wait for the next one! Update soon!

Thank you for this chapter !

I like it. A chaotic chapter to show the mood

OMG this is an amazing chapter, I had almost given up hope but I am so glad u r continuing to write this. Also thank you for making a decent female character that is not just a love interest. Hope you continue this adventure soon. Izzy Xx

Great chapter. Thanks for updating! I was excited to see the notification. :)

I feel like I did start reading this a long time ago and wondered what happened. I was just scanning for AR stories and the summary peeked my interest. I just read all 13 chapters and despite how you criticize your own work, I found it quite good and look forward to more.

i love this story so much, thank you dearly for the update! I love Sofia, so glad she's not going to be a love interest though. How are she and alex going to get out of this?