Found myself watching Meet the Robinsons again a couple hours ago and found this gem... I love their dynamic and the way you’ve written them! :)

Awwww! This was so sweet!

(Yes. That is my account. I am too lazy to login.)

Anyways. I like your story so far. It is cute! And, despite the couple of grammar mistakes, I will read on because I like it.

Okay, I really liked seeing this in Franny's perspective-it explained a lot and made her really relatable! I'm so glad that you expanded it into a whole story, and I really hope that you continue it soon! Your writing style is really good and adorable, but also realistic! Please continue, and thank you for the story! :)

Make another chapter... Please!

That is just freakin AMAZING! i absolutley loooved it, your friend was right you DO rock at angst type of writing :D :D :D

Oh wonderful! I-having been an emotional teenage girl myself-found this to be very realistic. You had me almost crying when she ran out. Great work! :)

Oh my goodness;

this is perfection!

O,O

I am going to read this everyday for the rest of my life. No joke. xD

It's so... perfect. xDDD That's all I can say! It's not cheesey, just the right amount of fluff and emotion, perfect personalities, completely in character...

PERFECTION.

Though, all of the fics of yours that I've read have been perfection. ;D Great job, on my favorite's list!

Nicely done! And I WOULD like to read the flip side of this story.

sorry...I realize I've already commented. But I just had to read this again. Honestly, you should really consider adding more chapters to this! I really enjoyed this one-shot!

interesting, I love your take on Franny's 'heart o glass.' I have to say this is one of the best stories in the Robinsons Archive. I wish I could write as well as you! Keep up the good work!

LOVED it~ And I'm reading the sequel already~ PLEASE update on that soon!

Keep writing~

~KKCopper

Great story. I really like your other story "Once Upon a Time Machine" too. They're both really greatand I hope you finish that one soon. Can't wait!

I liked this a lot! It was really good!

Somehow I can't help but think the blonde girl asked Cornelius if she was his girl.

Very cute. I really liked everyone's voice. I think it worked well. You definitely did a good job on making the character's human. (Enough so that I was a bit frustrated with Franny's attitude.)

I didn't really catch anything that bothered me, so good job!

I would love to see Cornelius' perspective, myself.