Well written. I was wondering throughout the story who was in trouble and why Shep was so worried.

But oh, goodness. Poor darling Kaidan. So sad for him.

:/

not what I was excepting since your other stories had them together. But nontheless it was good.

Oh, awesome. Bravo! Loved it. XD

O.O Poor Kaidan!

This fic was short, but was excellent nonetheless. The way you led up to the last couple of sentences was really well done. Great work!

This was an absolute delight to read, Fortune. I loved every second of it. The way you set up the twist at the end was brilliant. I'd love for you to visit this Kaidan again.

I don't have words for this other than:

:(

But this was really good.

Nice story Fort, even though I was kinda hoping it would end with a certain someone dying. Sorry Liara.

Oh, poor Kaidan. Interesting twist on things, but it seems so cruel of Shep to put him through that.

Very nicely done Fort.

Wow, so sad and beautiful at the same time. Kaidan is really a strong man. I wonder how little asari look like...

Aww, it's amazing how you conveyed so much emotion in so few words. I love how the scene is obviously sad, bittersweet, yet happy for everyone but Kaidan, all at once. Now I want to give Kaidan a hug...

That is beautiful and sad, and quite touching. You've got a remarkable gift at evoking emotions. Apparently, I cannot resist the angst.

GAWD. And I mean that in an awesome way, Fort. :) Very nice little one shot. Poor Kaidan!