oh this is awesome, need more please

please please please update soon!

I love the idea, and I love the story!

I have been hunting for inheritance cycle and here's something I finally like. Chapters a bit short, but that's okay. I like the premise and the word you update soon.

like the story so afr but i would be alot happier if u kept writing i really think that this story could go somewhere so please keep writing

from ur fan PANTHA.

sounds interesting, but how did they get there? I like the story, but a bit od background info is needed...

And pleeeaaasse make the chapters longer ;]

grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr UPDATE

amazing idea i must say!

update soon, i will be waiting!

An evil Roran? I don't think that's ever been done before.

I always wondered what would happen if that actually occurred. (My prediction: it will.) I think they would just plaster themselves to the walls as far apart as possible, and stare at each other suspiciously the whole time. Anyway, I want to see where this goes.

nice... continue...

i would love 2 c some argumens! p

I started to read this and had to laugh. This is going to be great. But as they are discussing their options, could there be some mention of how they came to be in this situation?

I am also curious as to what the king is trying to accomplish. I could make guesses, but I thought I'd ask first.