Wow! Great story! You are a very good writer! At the beginning, I was very afraid to continue reading thinking you didn’t finish the story but it was so good that I didn’t care. I am happy you did it. I can continue the story any way I want so at the end it was a good one. I really hope you’ll write a sequel, I enjoyed it a lot! Good job!

Whew! You are a wonderful author. And I must be a masochist because I had to keep reading this story although my stomach was in knots during most of it! Your writing certainly made everything very real. Having said that, I do hope you write a sequel that gets G back on the team. Didn't most of G's problems with the law happen when he was a juvenile? Wouldn't those files be sealed? I suppose that still leaves the problem of his undercover work being compromised, but I'm sure Hetty can solve that, with a little help from you, of course! LOL! Truly an outstanding story. Thank you for sharing your talent!

Please update this great story

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story! It was so amazing! I read through it in one sitting and stayed up all night and I am really satisfied with what you did! I loved all the characters, it felt so raw and so full of emotion. I really love the plot and it how the ending is just so...right how everything did not right itself and go back to the way it was before because it can't, but you can make it okay. And that is just how life is sometimes. I loved your OCs and how well the wove into the story and drove the plot. I really love how well the characterization was and how you made the world seem alive. While reading your fic I felt like I was actually watching a movie of it.

I and just really in awe of your writing and storytelling! Thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece! If you ever end up writing a sequel I know I would love to read it.

Oh my gosh that was good! Loved every chapter...kept the characters honest and true...but it's an open endin...with no sequal. That's like answering a question with a question...no good byes...no reaction...no follow up...no "hey, things are great, just back for a visit"...no "you've proved yourself, come back now" or unleashed fury...yeah...what's with that? Seriously though, great job.

What? Callen do something "stupid"? Never...

Well, ain't he just a jerk...poor Callen

Oh wow. Good start...lol..."I liked that eardrum"...hahaha

Wouldn't Hetty have had access to these 'hard files' of Callen's? She's like, A) Callen's surrogate mom/guardian angel, and B) ruler of the world. She would have at least known about them- that's her job, after all.

Awesome story, really well written...sequel really really nice. I just loved this Fic so much, thank you! Now I just hope for a sequel! You are gonna do it, right? Pleaseeee!

love it

Just re-read this story and found the epilogue. I still love this story - it is excellently written (the odd typo here and there). The darker plots, characters and scenarios very much appeal to my imagination. But despite that I am pleased to see that the epilogue shows a glimmer of hope for Callen; that he has not been abandoned by his team and whereas he may be a long way from being able to return, he can once again start working undercover on some shady types of black ops, where he can forget about being G Callen and the horror of his past that he has recently been forced to relive.

A sequel would be awesome - if not, then this still remains one of top 3 NCISLA, Callen-based fanfics!

The ending of a good story is always sad; I wish they could go on forever. I hope there is a sequel; I know it would be equally as exciting. Thank you for sharing your talents with your faithful readers.

Spent 2-3 days reading your god-so-awesome-fiction.
It was dark, even worst x) but it was great. Almost like you knew it for having lived it, i mean the way you described all characters' feelings and all ! Didn't even found OOC :)
Anyway, it rocks !

Awww Callen I want to give you a big hug