Wonderful story - lovely writing style! You captured the essence of the characters. KEEP WRITING

Gawddamn, girl, you can WRITE. That was aweeeesome!

Really loved the logical gentleness of this story - well done!

So beautiful! Perfect note to end it on because it's so darn true.

I love her trying to explain herself at the end there, really made me laugh.

And him trying to let her go was heartbreaking...I'm glad he didn't have to. :)

Nicely written, I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

loved it :)

Okay, well, that was just...MAGIC. (go ahead and groan)

Listen, I know you wish Bones & Booth were yours, but from my point of view, if you had them, that would probably mean you were under the thumb of the show's producers, and if you were *that* then you definitely **wouldn't** be able to write them with such wholeness and depth, even with flaws, you know?

You have them so perfectly, yet you make them so much *more* that it's a pure joy to read your stories. (Heck, you even make the ones we don't want to like likeable, and that ain't easy!)

"Everything inside him screeches to a grinding halt and restarts, skipping a beat." See? That's what I'm talkin' about.

applause applause applause!

Great job! I love it when authors work in Catherine and Hacker realistically without making them into villains, and yet without diminishing what B and B have together.

Excellent as usual!

That was so nice to read. :)

I don't think I can describe it in any other way than 'smooth'. As weird as that may sound. lol

It was easy to read, it wasn't too fluffy or too corny and it wasn't too angsty, although it had it's moments. I really enjoyed it. :)

I liked the whole magic/fate theme running through it and I'm glad to see that you kept it up all the way through. :)

Awesome writing. :)

Thanks for a good one.

Em

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Oh my goodness, that was so beautiful! One of the best interpretations of what may/may not happen, I think :)

Good job :)

Read the story on your LJ page but I have to leave a comment here too... LOVE THE ENDING! (I think you realized by now that I love your endings...) ) Great job!

Gah! I loved it! Specially those references to Booth's 'making love' speech. I swear to you, anyone who listens to that speech determines to find some to REALLY make love with, hahaha.

Great writing, as always ;)

Honestly, I want to cry. This was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read, and what I love most about is how true you stay to the BB canon. I really can't stand it when what could be a great story suddenly takes a sloppy turn and becomes all corny and fairytale-perfect, and you did the most amazing job of keeping both Brennan and Booth IC. Am I even making sense? I feel like I'm rambling, because I'm just so impressed. You phrased everything flawlessly and I have nothing but justified compliments for your writing. :) Thank you so, so very much for writing!

"...I can accept that what I feel for you is rooted in the need to consummate an emotional connection rather than just the desire for a physical release." - This is such a Brennan way to say she wants him for all the right reasons. In fact, your "Brennanease" in this fic is spot on.

Nicely done.