| Reviews for Lost |
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   gov the scoffer chapter 21 . 10/2/2018 lol, you are never going to finish this are you? It was great so far though |
| Silversun XD chapter 21 . 3/11/2017 I must know what happens next! |
| A chapter 21 . 5/27/2015 This story would be even better if you worked on your dialogue a little. It doesn't always sound natural. If you want to, get a voice recording app (or a tape recorder if you're feeling retro) and record yourself reading just the dialogue, then play it back and adjust it if it doesn't sound right. And look up the rules for commas. They're hard to remember sometimes, but they're important. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/29/2013 Abe is a complete dumb ads . Oh look im out the cage , oh hi guys oh shit! |
| Pappenheimer chapter 21 . 3/18/2013 Oh gog. Poor Abe! I can't wait to find out what happens next. How is Carl going to antagonize them now? (Just assuming from Abe's psychic reading from earlier chapters. But hey, he could always pull a facade on us and pretend to help before making things worse, though it don't really seem his style). I know that feel with school, too. I'm in all my clinical rotations for my major, so I have zilch time for anything besides my studies (except, y'know, the 15 minute break between classes where there's not much time to really do anything except read a few short chapters of fanfic). So, I'll patiently wait for the next update, even though you've left this for... what? a year and a half, maybe? Just gonna wait and hope. |
| shadow chapter 21 . 1/16/2013 hope to read more, How does he exscape! and how come hellboy hasent found him? been a while so i hope you havent forgotton poor abe |
| Hoods2428 chapter 21 . 1/1/2013 Oh wow you really left me hanging :/ please update soon this is getting way to good ;) |
| Steelracer01956SIC chapter 21 . 10/31/2012 Love it! w |
| BaraKiryuHuntress chapter 21 . 10/7/2012 Oh my gosh. I LOVE this so much. And I've never been a fan of Abes past life so to speak. PLEASE UPDATE! |
| a person chapter 21 . 10/4/2012 I really like this story please continue. |
| Cora Sinclair chapter 21 . 7/12/2012 I started reading this and I got really into it. You have no idea how sad I was when I tried going to the next chapter and saw that this was it. :( Please update soon! |
| cliffwriter chapter 11 . 4/16/2012 I really liked this chapter, but Abe never really struck me as the sarcastic type. But other than that great job |
| cliffwriter chapter 21 . 4/16/2012 Oh my god please update! I love this story puleasssssssse. X0 |
| cliffwriter chapter 12 . 4/16/2012 I'm kinda liking this sarcastic Abe. He's hilarious. I could see myself saying the same thing to my evil Spanish teacher :) |
| cliffwriter chapter 11 . 4/16/2012 I really liked this chapter, but Abe never really struck me as the sarcastic type. But other than that great job |
