Great story, I really hope there's another chapter, even though it's been almost a year since you updated. I think you have a natural talent for writing, especially considering how well this was done without a beta-reader. I hope to read more of your stories in the future, and I also hope that you post more guyXguy stories like this one.

I cam safely say I love this fic: :3 It's fabulously written and it makes me all warm and squishy inside. XD There's a severe lack of Miles amd Lamg fics out there and I really have to thank you for posting this, just, yay!

Really good job on this story!

Your story is sensual and realistic.

The characters are, obviously, easy to understand, but you give them a certain life that goes past the series. Interesting and ever so wonderful, I can't help but love this!

I hope you aim to add more as this definitely needs more chapters to continue this story. It would be interesting to see what would happen between the two of them, even further, I mean.

I'll be keeping my eye out for the rest of this story, that's for sure!

With Luv,

Gabriel Mehayel

will you update or is this it? it's soooooo good!

Love this fic, really :D I find this couple really hot /

Thanks for the fic

Bye bye

*dies happily*

wow,

that

was

HOT!

Aww... So HOT! They're both hot! Miles especially but whatever...

I hope you'll update sooner this time! :p

Aww, Lang got Edgey all sexed out. :3 It was a long wait but it was well worth it. There was a spot near the end where you forgot an apostrophe and you put 'Langs' instead. I think that was the only mistake that I caught though.

:) Hope you can update soon cause I really like this~

~Scooter~

...You did not just leave it hanging there OH MY GOD.

This was amazing I cannot even tell you aksjhhd. It was funny and sexy at the same time (I want to run my hand down Lang's abs goddamnit) and I can tell that you have a good understanding of these characters and their personalities.

I adore Lang and you write him very well, from his body language all the way to the Lang Zi sayings. I love Langworth and it seems to have a very small fanbase so I hope that you continue this wonderful story! :'D

That was a horrible place to leave on. :( I really hope you update soon and don't just leave it like this cause God...that was great. I love how you mix humor into all this. :D Love the characterizations, too! Kudos and keep up the good work!

~Kyuuketsuki_Nekko

Your writing style is very fun to read. The steamy stuff is well done, but more impressively it isn't out of character (beyond the normal bounds of assuming the characters are gay). You write situations that are fun with characters I can actually consider being dynamic. I think I will check out some of your other stuff as well just because of your writing style. Keep it up!

Amazing, and really really hot. This maybe one of the best smut fanfics that i have read in a while, they dont write them like they used to.

Please continue. (or else)

~Alice.

you're such a mean person.

i friggin' love you.

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c: