I love it! please update soon!

she's been to all the places u mentioned Earth, H***, and Azarath

Wow! The fact that English isn't you're first language and yet you write very well is amazing! What kind of censored would flame you? That's so wrong! I think that the first part of chapter one is a little slow to progress, but you put in a lot of detail and I haven't seen a single mistake yet! The story is pretty good so far! You should continue it! "Just kiss already!" laugh

Wow! The fact that English isn't you're first language and yet you write very well is amazing! What kind of censored would flame you? That's so wrong! I think that the first part of chapter one is a little slow to progress, but you put in a lot of detail and I haven't seen a single mistake yet! The story is pretty good so far! You should continue it! "Just kiss already!" laugh

Please continue this story it has a story line like no other I've ever read. Please update soon.

luv ur storry

I like this but why is Cyborg talking like a LOLcat?

my favorite is the third chapter! lol! :)

And English wasn't your first language? Well, than this is pretty good. btw, what is your first language? i'm curious, because i know english and french.

LOL! That was so funny.. Please update soon.. :)

Hahahaha! ROFL! I love this! I'm so excited to see what happens next that I think I'm gonna explode! Metaphorically, of course. I don't know if I actually WOULD explode, even if that were possible; because then I don't get to see what happens next! I love the idea! It's great! Keep up the good work! :)

~Rose

Oh, that's really cool! I love the idea of there being more Cyborg on this site! He's one of the more over-looked characters in the fanfic-verse.

I'm so sorry about criticizing you; I didn't know that English isn't your first language. What other language do you speak? I'm 50% mexican; so I know a little bit of Spanish...

Oh, and about your story; this is shaping up to be really good! I going to move ahead to the next chapter!

~Rose

I think it has a good plotline. Nice idea, by the way. I just found it today, and I must say I thoroughly enjoy the idea. However there were several grammatical errors; have you considered getting a beta?

Anyways; I really like it so far! Your writing style is very unique and intertaining! I'm going to keep reading! :D

Later Days!

~Rosalind2013

This chapter cracked me up! I definitely need lessons from you, keep up the good work. It is hard to update with tests and everything. But you're doing a really good job!

~Addie

i love it i especially like when Raven and BB got into that finishing each others sentences.

LOLZ! Update soon, please!