| Reviews for Alice in Underland: The Return |
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multyfangirl21 chapter 65 . 3/27/2019 And now I'm heading strait to see what you've posted of the other parts of the wonderful storyline |
multyfangirl21 chapter 64 . 3/27/2019 Reading your plans to do multiple stories for the storyline is icing on a wonderful cake. You can expect to be added to my list of favorite authors soon, it would have happened even if you only made this jewel. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 63 . 3/27/2019 Normally I tend to skim the parts of a story with the wedding but this both riveting and moving. It was a beautiful wedding. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 62 . 3/27/2019 I cant help but compare this story to a gem in a coalmine. At the very least I rank this at gold. I'd be swooning over all the lovely and great romance in this if I was a woman who did swoon. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 58 . 3/27/2019 Well that's quite the honeymoon that they're going to have |
multyfangirl21 chapter 56 . 3/27/2019 I had a feeling that Elsie and Stayne were going to be a match after he meantioned that shes been nice to him. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 55 . 3/27/2019 I'm not surprised that they feel a need to reconnect after what they've been through |
multyfangirl21 chapter 54 . 3/27/2019 I should have stopped reading and fell asleep 3 and a half hours ago, yet here I am still reading. I'm having trouble putting my phone down and stop reading. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 53 . 3/27/2019 Huh, he'll live. And hes gotten most of his sanity back. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 52 . 3/27/2019 I was wondering what Mally was up to, characters like her in this are the ones I tend to keep and eye out for with a bit of suspicion. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 51 . 3/27/2019 Welp, hes going to die. But that explains how he got there... shouldn't Mirana and the rest be able to see something from her balcony? |
multyfangirl21 chapter 47 . 3/26/2019 Oh , goodness. I just had a terrible thought. If that was Stayne in the bushes then he likely heard they say that they're going to the hat making room and might have stuck into there. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 46 . 3/26/2019 Thoughts, so many wonderful feels! But one of the first thoughts that came to mind after Tarrant proposed was if Stayne trys to crash the wedding there will be a line of people trying to kill him for ruining it. Another thought, I noticed in the beginning that Absolen seems to be like a guardian and father figure to Alice so I cant help but hope that he'll be able to somehow transform into a human for a short while to walk Alice down the isle, I suppose he could technically do that as his normal butterfly self but I cant help but think it would be a sweeter touch if he was temporarily human to do it. Either way it would be very sweet to acknowledge their bond with him walking her down the isle. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 45 . 3/26/2019 So first the surprise match and now the ring is finally done! This is one of the best feels chapters in this! |
multyfangirl21 chapter 44 . 3/26/2019 Quite the chain of people to bring to Underland |