Reviews for Alice in Underland: The Return
multyfangirl21 chapter 65 . 3/27/2019
And now I'm heading strait to see what you've posted of the other parts of the wonderful storyline
multyfangirl21 chapter 64 . 3/27/2019
Reading your plans to do multiple stories for the storyline is icing on a wonderful cake. You can expect to be added to my list of favorite authors soon, it would have happened even if you only made this jewel.
multyfangirl21 chapter 63 . 3/27/2019
Normally I tend to skim the parts of a story with the wedding but this both riveting and moving. It was a beautiful wedding.
multyfangirl21 chapter 62 . 3/27/2019
I cant help but compare this story to a gem in a coalmine. At the very least I rank this at gold.
I'd be swooning over all the lovely and great romance in this if I was a woman who did swoon.
multyfangirl21 chapter 58 . 3/27/2019
Well that's quite the honeymoon that they're going to have
multyfangirl21 chapter 56 . 3/27/2019
I had a feeling that Elsie and Stayne were going to be a match after he meantioned that shes been nice to him.
multyfangirl21 chapter 55 . 3/27/2019
I'm not surprised that they feel a need to reconnect after what they've been through
multyfangirl21 chapter 54 . 3/27/2019
I should have stopped reading and fell asleep 3 and a half hours ago, yet here I am still reading. I'm having trouble putting my phone down and stop reading.
multyfangirl21 chapter 53 . 3/27/2019
Huh, he'll live. And hes gotten most of his sanity back.
multyfangirl21 chapter 52 . 3/27/2019
I was wondering what Mally was up to, characters like her in this are the ones I tend to keep and eye out for with a bit of suspicion.
multyfangirl21 chapter 51 . 3/27/2019
Welp, hes going to die. But that explains how he got there... shouldn't Mirana and the rest be able to see something from her balcony?
multyfangirl21 chapter 47 . 3/26/2019
Oh , goodness. I just had a terrible thought. If that was Stayne in the bushes then he likely heard they say that they're going to the hat making room and might have stuck into there.
multyfangirl21 chapter 46 . 3/26/2019
Thoughts, so many wonderful feels!
But one of the first thoughts that came to mind after Tarrant proposed was if Stayne trys to crash the wedding there will be a line of people trying to kill him for ruining it.
Another thought, I noticed in the beginning that Absolen seems to be like a guardian and father figure to Alice so I cant help but hope that he'll be able to somehow transform into a human for a short while to walk Alice down the isle, I suppose he could technically do that as his normal butterfly self but I cant help but think it would be a sweeter touch if he was temporarily human to do it. Either way it would be very sweet to acknowledge their bond with him walking her down the isle.
multyfangirl21 chapter 45 . 3/26/2019
So first the surprise match and now the ring is finally done! This is one of the best feels chapters in this!
multyfangirl21 chapter 44 . 3/26/2019
Quite the chain of people to bring to Underland
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