Minor plot hole: Alice is lying on the bed. But somehow she manages to shrug the dress from her arms "and let it fall down aroung her". How is that possible? :)

This guy simply isn't lucky... Each time he tries to initiate sex with Alice, someone disturbs him ;)

Awwwwwww! That's Sooo romantic! I want an ending like that too!

I have to say you are the best writer for Stayne/Alice stories! This story is AWESOME! Please make a story when Alice has a baby with Stayne! That would be really cool!

I completely forgot to follow this story earlier and this review is very late but I still love how you wrote it - especially Stayne who you have nailed spectacularly in the final chapters (I had to re-read it xD). Thank you for writing this :D

Damn...gotta say this was the best smut for Alistayne! But for some reason i have a feeling that this is not the end of this tale since Stayne killed Margaret's husband! lol

Wowowowowowowowowowowow. lol This is one of the the best Stayne/Alice fanfics I have ever read!

Oh god, that was a perfectly twisted fairytale!-jewel

I must point out that the dormouse is in fact female.

No matter if it was short, it stills great!

YAY! a happy-ever-after! though i am sad that its done...

no it cant be over!

*snicker* Good story. You really hated Lowell didn't you? Ah well he will never cheat on Alice's sister again. Muahahahaha

aw it's the end :(

it was soo good! glad he killed lowel that guy is scary!

GO STAYNE AND AlICE! woo

sorry about that im slightly high

Randomness96

This was a lovely chapter, and your writing is excellent, as always. Lowell sounds like a dushbag, and I'm so glad he's dead. What justice too, being killed by Stayne!

Poor Alice. She seems so torn up by her internal conflict too. You write her character with such accuracy, and Stayne is hot and sexy and dark as always.

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